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My god your chapters are long! (Not that I'm complaining ^_^). Your fic is great and I look forward to reading more. Please update soon, okay? If you don't, I don't what I would do!! Keep up the great work!!! -Thanks!
~Morgan

I hope Kagome doesn't get mad at Sesshoumaru. I think Kagome should remember the time in the cave, because that showed how much Sesshoumaru loved her and she wouldn't be mad at him if she knew how he really felt. I wanna know what would happen if Kagome went back to her own time. Would she still crave for him? Will he follow and be able to go through the well? Does Kagome have dreams about Sesshoumaru?

^_^ I just finished reading the third or fourth chapter in your story, "The Poison of Erised" and I can't stop myself from saying that I LOVE the way your write, and I'm sure that you hear that all the time. I, myself, am I writer, though I can never get the courage to put my work on any website; But the way you write, it's just simply amazing!! I really hope that you keep it up and don't let what the "flamers" say get to you.



Your work is just amazing

----Jessie

How could you leave it like that? I was so into it too.
This story is so good I just could not put it down so to speek.
I am sad cause the last chapter is so short.
It has been nine chapters don't you think that it is time for Sesshomaru
to show himself. This story is very sexy in an obsessive way. Keep up the good work.

Monecque

Ooooooo DAMN An invisable bear youkai deadly as hell!!
I hope sesshomaru starts being more upfront about things,
and I wonder what inuyasha will do when he finds out about his brother and Kagome.

Hrmmm...*ponders this and more* Sel~

I have loved all your works I've read so far, and this one is no disappointment. Glad you had ch.9 posted on here, cause I missed it on mmorg. Quite the cliffhanger at the moment (as if we don't know where Kagome went, ne?), and it'll be interesting to see how K or S is explained for the disappearance. Anyhow, love the 'mystery potion idea + mysterious changes not associated with the mysterious potion' idea, can't wait to see more.

Great story, I read this before, but it was only up to the second chapter and I can't remember if I reveiwed but I am now ^.^ so update soon!

For some reason I have the feeling that this fic will end very badly for some characters.
I'm waiting to see.

Hmm... you know, while I normally enjoy the sess/kag ship, I really don't like it in this story... Kags not being in control of her own choices and her own situation doesn't sit well with me. In fact, I think what has been done to her is tantamount to rape/slavery. Hopefully she'll toss of his enchantment and throw it all back in his face. This is a story where I'd actually like to see Inuyasha pull through for her for once....

Once again, It was such a great chapter. I can't help but feel sorrow for Kagome not remembering her FIRST time...I mean I would be horrified if I didn't remember doing it with Sesshomaru! I mean come one! Who would wanna forget being in that man's arms! He's hot hot hot! Gosh I'm getting worked up again. *takes DEEP breath* You are absolutely, amazingly good at describing emotions. You've got a gift! It's good that your using it. Anyway, great chapter once again and I hope you bring another fantastic one soon! See ya! I'll be waiting!

P.S.-Does that sound a bit creepy? 'I'll be waiting'
P.P.S-Sorry if it did!