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for The Poison of Erised

by Vyncent

person Bookreader9999
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter as always!

Keep up the good work!!!
person Linda
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I especially loved this chapter because it brings their bond to a new level. It's not only the physical, but the spiritual connection of them.(Although the physiclal is pretty dam good!)Looking foward to what comes next...and when they'll be together again and when can see the bond strengthen even more. Hurry!
person Linda
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD....I'm still fanning myself! In the words of Kag....MORE MORE!
person Anon
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been following your story but I am the same way if the next chapter takes to long then I lose interest in it , however I have been following along and I am sorry that I haven't reviewed I do respect your opion so I hope the story will turn out alright on the other site
person J
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want to know how I vote so you win like your suppose to. Congrats man. God bless!! I do love your stories.
person too lazy
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read this yet, but if it's anything like the beast awakens one was, I'm sure I'm ganna love it. One thing straight off the bat that I MUST correct you on though is: "tenchi" is NOT angel! I'm really not sure where people keep gettting that from... I'm guessing it's because the heard the real word for angel -- "tenshi" -- and then heard someone talking about "tenchi" from 'tenchi muyo!' and got it confused. According to my dictionary, "tenchi" is 'creation of heaven and earth'. So, again, it's "tenshi" not "tenchi". I'll come back with a better review once I've actually read the story. Though I must say... I really do think you should continue with the beast awakens story:P
person Kokuei
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No you have to continue....I really like this story....and it's true you shouldn't have to be one of those people who demand reviews. I mean you can't make people like your writing it just isn't right. Anyway please continue with this it's really really good! This is one of the few good Sessho/Kagome fics I read on here anymore alot of them aren't really that good and don't really catch my attention but this one does! Please continue with this fic!
person Alleycat
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Come on! Thats not fare! I check every day to see if you have updated this and your other stories! There are a lot more people who read but just don't review. And yes I know its frusterating but most people get lazy about reviewing or don't have time. Well at any rate I hope you reconcider but if you don't, can I at least get your author name on Single spark, so I can keep following along? I really do love this story. can you email me it, please?

Thanks.
person inuchik
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it and cant wait for more please update soon. :P
- love inuchik

schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet, holy mother of God! Lemonization, thy name is Vyncent!

**kneels and bows head**

My liege!