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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start! Now hurry up and write more please!!
Ja ne
Ja ne
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you NEED to continue this! it really just BEGS for more!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that you really really need to add more to this! it just doesn't seem finished to me. and even books with sequals coming out have some sense of finish to them. y'know what i mean? i think that you should definatley add more, as i think it is a good START!
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was too short, it isn't quite as good as it could be if it were longer, there jsut seems to much left to cut it off there.
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked that story.It was very beautiful.
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaahhhh, that was too sweet! Sango singing Miroku to sleep...that would be so cute! Loved it!
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good stuff, try your hand at a longer involved story
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Much better, you could base a story off of this attempt.