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for Helping Out

by Moonwing

person Anon
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, though it was a little wierd that mirokou needed help wasking his arm, i can now see why he might need help, but your story should continue, it really needs more, it could really develope into a very good story, i think
person kiara
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute! And funny! I really liked the Miroku and Inuyasha part at the end! Make a sequal or add more chapters, please!
person chibi_sanoku105
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um, interesting fanfic, but how is this rated R when there's BARELY any nudity??? I want a LEMON!!
Add another chapter please!!
person deep serenity
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
where the hell is the rest of it????????????/ that was good writing! and good plot