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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT! WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!! ^_^
E-mail me when u do.... Girlfrog8966@wmconnect.com
E-mail me when u do.... Girlfrog8966@wmconnect.com
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Keep up the good work and update soon!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY. PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THIS STORY.
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
VERY VERY VERY VERY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD
I REALLY LIKED IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are soo evil to leave it there! update soon!
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out!
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cute and cool, cant wait till you update next!
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story holds promise. And I only wish to give you some advise. Some of your sentences do not flow right, your dialouge is a little out of form and you need to space better in between paragraphs. Every writer needs an editor, so I suggest that you find a beta. I believe that authors on this site offer servies in that area.
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