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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A really good oneshot. You captured their feelings over being resurrected and not knowing how things might end up for them well. A nice song too.
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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Soooooo good!! I'm impressed of how good it all sound when being readed, the words and so... I'm a big fan off the shichinintais, mostly ban and jako (Soo cute^^)..... AndI tell; This is one off the best I've ever read with them^^ be proud....
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm a Bajatsu fan and that was awsome. Hmm they were dead for ten years and I sepose it would have been thier souls yurning each other, but still I wish I could right like you.
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh, yet another awesome ban/jak story from you! i'm glad i decided to look for some and found yours.. ^___^
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kool
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no offence but this is sick jakotsu and bankotsu are just friends! jakotsu loves inuyasha not his best friend! besides bankotsu is MINE all mine!!!! ewwww grosss best friends doing it!!!! ahhhhh!!!! yes i no im insane
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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was an amazing peice of writing. I loved the *cough*lemon*cough*
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It's to good to be a one shot!!!!
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It's to good to be a one shot!!!!
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY LIKED THE STORY. PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE STORIES.
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeaaaaaaah... So I said before that I loved you... Now... Er, well... I love you even more. lol
You left them nameless! How ingenius of you, tarea! What an impact.
Many cookies!
You left them nameless! How ingenius of you, tarea! What an impact.
Many cookies!
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, girl. You sure know how to work things into a climax. You could feel the passion as well as the ejaculation building hehehee. I usually don't read love making scenes. I don't see why you don't think you're a good writer. You have a great flow with words.