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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story has a lot of potential. But try not to add your authors notes in the middle of a sentence. It disrupts the whole flow of you're story. If you do want to add an AN, then put a number in brackets. eg. [1]. And then you can just have your comment from that spot at the bottom after the chapter. Otherwise you're story is very good for a first chapter, just remebrt o check it over before you post it. By the way, I vote for KOUGA! ^^;
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KOUGA! KOUGA! KOUGA!! KOUGA!!! KOUGA!!!!!
Erm... KOUGA x Inu, please?!
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Erm... KOUGA x Inu, please?!
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. Keep up the good work toots.
And, for the record, I prefer Sesshoumaru. But hey, it's really up to you.
And, for the record, I prefer Sesshoumaru. But hey, it's really up to you.
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was a little short. but not bad. you gave a lot of info in that little bit. not bad. keep it comin
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sesshoumaru
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok...nice...i wouldnt mind if it was sesh/inu and koga/inu but thats me.
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon this is very interesting and I don't care who Inuyasha ends up with... I'll toss a coin... Sesshomaru it is then.
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sesshomaru plz!!
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kouga, Kouga, Kouga! Inuyasha should hook up with Kouga! Pretty good beginning. You've got me wondering what gonna happen to him, just enough for me to feel the need to read more. The numerous author comments towards the end were a little distracting, but I believe overall it was a great start. Looking forward to reading more!
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like, I like.
InuxKoga.
InuxKoga.