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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is so cute
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not bad, bosy girls but their teens! some of the concepts are very familar to me even down to names BUT that is to be expected seeing as it's fan fiction and probably everything has been used once or twice considering how many INUYASHA fanfics and different sites there are.
good job so far.
good job so far.
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read the whole story at once and it is really good. I didn't catch any grammar errors, so kudos to you. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm...you know, normally i don't read extensions of kag with kids and stuff liek that, but your story has me intrigued. i'm intersted to see the girls reactions to inu and where he is and what he's doing. (god help us all if miro hits on those two girls). lol. anyway, good story, keep it up!
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very intresting story. I am hooked please update soon
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooo.... this is all so far? This is such an awesome story, I was so dissapointed when there was no "next chapter" button.
Please continue on this........
Please continue on this........
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, this is really interesting, update soon, i am VERY eager soo where this is going.
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kagome suffers too much...i feel bad for her...update soon , and i'll more,much much more...I'm getting annoying right now aren't I? ...anyway bye :)
Love,
Your # 1 fan:
Me
Love,
Your # 1 fan:
Me
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this fanfic sounds realllly goood ...i hope that ch 1 gets downloaded fast..i am already excited ..i cant wait ...good luck with your story...^.^'
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chapter one was really good! this story has promise :-) please update soon.