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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its really good update soon
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is SO great! I love the concept and I love the way you put it together. So romantic. I can't wait till you write the rest of the story..keep it up! =)
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow I can't believe how fast you are updating.. Where did you find your muse *L*
Anyway keep up the great writing.
Chanda
Anyway keep up the great writing.
Chanda
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wont say this more than once okay?
[b]PLEASE CONTINUE I BEG OF YOU PLEASE!!!!![/b]
[b]PLEASE CONTINUE I BEG OF YOU PLEASE!!!!![/b]
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
READ 7-12, very very good, (please stop putting author notes in the story, readers should be mature enough to understand what your writing since your writing is very clear) I love all the Kouga stuff! Geez they are slow thoug in not realizing that she may somehow be related to Kagome, I would have preferred Shippo hooking up with Michiko BUT your story, I just think everyone ignores Shippo and Sess....well like I said your story, well written, good different and creative plot!!!
Good job
Good job
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story. a little lost for the last line in the last chapter though. she kicked a demons ass with little hesitation...why shed tears? very well done. i like the girls, they are real spitfires. i feel there was a little bit lacked between inu's reaction to the girls and theirs to him. but well done nonetheless. anywhok, keep it up!
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OI! well..won't they all be suprised when they find out just WHO she is. hehe. great chapter. i like the girls. they're spunky.
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying your story... Man Kouga is going to shit his pants when he finds out that's Kagome's daughter..
Please update soon.
Please update soon.
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay chap 7-good, yay bringing in KOUGA!!!!!!!!!!!! and did I say I like the daughters? they sound just like american teens with their slang and liking material things, you did a good job, plus their likable!
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.8 is up and it was pretty good but, it seemed a little rushed. No worries though so keep up the good work and update when you have time please.