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for Under the Egyptian Sun

by Crystal56

person You don\'t need to know
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jep it's much better. It really has a lot potential.
person katt_jam
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like this will turn out to be a great story, I really liked the first chapter and will be checking back to read new chaps. Please update soon.
person SchorrDifferent
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it ! but don't leave me hanging u hear! I want to know what are inuyasha the god of fertilatly thinks of are little prietess of nubis, how fitting i must say to put kagome under the watch of a god that looks like a dog !!! ra is a bird so i'm confused on that part LOL. Who the heck cares keep writing i'll check in to see if i got anymore of the story !!!!!!!!! KEEP IT UP !
person Anika
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that's so romantic. write more, please
person I\'m an Ice Queen
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello, I love your story....update soon please.