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This is GREAT! Update soon!

Very creative, good writing, I dig, I dig very much.

Seems very good, I hope you continue this fic soon.

love the story...a new twist on the gang..please keep writing would love to see how it ends...

Okay, so I'm biased... just look at my name... But I really think that you should make Kagome a priestess of Isis, seeing as how Isis is also a fertility god, and it'd be funny... Cause you made Inuyasha a fertility god as well.

Anubis is kinda dark, being the master of souls and all, and I really don't think Kagome's with her trusting heart and inherent goodness would really want to be a priestess for a death god.

Just a thought, not a demand. Otherwise, good grammar overall. You might want to use a bit more description rather than blunt sentences and dialouge. As my writing teacher once told me: Show, don't tell. I think this story has a lot of potential.

WOW!! This is good... Super.. Just as promising as your other story... Which I really do VERY much hope that you are not going to abandon.. I really enjoy that story as well.. Please; if you can, continue with both your stories... You really have soooooo much promise as a writer.... Update as you can with your story.... Do make Inuyasha work hard for his prize... evil smirk.....

cool..... try to update this story .
im itching to find out whats next.....

I love it!!!!! Please!!!!!please update soon!!!!!!

Okay I will bow to you for your descriptions. Everything down to the way the fish were left on the bank after the floods. Beautiful! I love Egypt myself and you have brought it to life with your words. Next, wonderful casting job. I know usually InuYasha’s role would be different but you have to make the story work. I’m also proud you didn’t make Kagome a priestess but a faithful servant of her god. That way there is no complication about the taboos of her having feelings besides her inner morals. But I do wonder what their reactions will be. Kagome tries to stay clear of guys but then again he is dressed in a “needy” fashion. So as long as InuYasha’s mouth doesn’t screw anything up he might be invited to diner. I know as time goes on Naraku will be pissed Kagome is chosen over Kanna, might make trouble for Kagome but hey what are you going to do against a god? I’m sure you’ll tell us. And thank you for keeping Koga and InuYasha locking horns. Some of my favorite battles are between them. Well good work and happy updating. I now see why Higurashi Inc. wasn’t updated. But I’m making sure to quench the thirst of your muse so we don’t have a repeat performance.

Wow this is turning out to be a good fic, I like how you what each characters role was and how it came to play in the story. I hope you update soon!