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That was an awsome chapter. I can't wait until you update again becasue this story doesn't sound like its even close to the ending. So Ican't wait until you update another juicy chapter like this one. Can't wait to hear from you soon!!!^_^

oooo more please!! i LOVE this!! ^^ a real eye catcher ooooo inuyasha is SOOO sexy!

I don't know why, but the story caught me. Maybe it is because I enjoyed Broken Darkness and Broken Dragons so much lol.. Anyway- I am loving the pace of this actually. I will be looking forward to seeing the different obsticals I am certain will be coming for them... lol. Great story so far! Keep it up!

wahoo for the update. Very nice. Maybe it was a little fast, but it wasn't too fast that I got lost or it became uninteresting. I liked how it worked out. I just wonder what the rest of the gods are going to think of Kagome. Hehe, waiting for the update

ok that chapter was FLAMING HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait for the next one. Please update soon.

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! yeah baby i loved it! Nice on the lemony goodness! Update soon.

this is really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really...etc. good so far. i can't wait to read the rest of Under the Egyptain Sun, it is soo exotic keep up the good work. i wonder what will happen next...???

Wow! Amazing! ur good at writting lemons! this is da best stori yet (not just bcuz inuyasha is portrayed as a hot Egyption god of Fertility). im totally gon review evry chance i hav! whoever is givin u flames bettah stop! this stori is captivating! 5 STARS!

this is great so far, please update!

cool! I love this story! I had a fic Idea very close to this one, so I might not do it for fear of plagerizing or something ^.^ but this is very good, I hope you keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more!