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for unknown beatuy

by unknownmiko

person Amanda-chan
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!Loved the whole lake part,that was cool^^But one question...Why dont you just say 'Kagome'?You say 'her'....Owe well...sorry,lol I'll just have to wait to find out what in the hell has happened for her to be away from Inu and the gang.Well anyways,I gave you a 5^.^ Your story is cool and has awesome lemons!!!!^.~Hope to see more chapters soon,I know,I'm a fan of your's already^.^~Amanda-chan
person Romance grl!
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*fans herself violently* yikes good fic,Hott coupling so far my favorite sesshomaru and kagome fic!!!!!!!! really good waiting on next chapter. email me when the next chapter is done ok!!!!! keep up the good work!!
person kaisgirl112
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg i LOVE this! its excellent and i cant wait for the next chappie! good luck and update soon ;)
person zackire
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i just read your unknown beauty and i'm very impressed. It's very well written though there are a few typos. But even so, you have my praise.
zackire