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for Demon spawn: Naraku's child

by Kaira

person RainStorm
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I have been waiting for you to update for so long. Please update, I want to know how this story will turn out. Thank you for taking the time to read this review. I like the plot and you got my interest peaked. PEACE!!!
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty good. I hope you get the next chapter up soon. I like the way you structured the story, it gives it a decent build-up and it leaves us wondering what will happen next...
I also can't wait to see how you'll characterize Naraku, that gonna be really interesting to read! ^^

All in all, it has the potential to be a very good story.
person Silmarion Darkheart
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon