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for Tit for 'Tet'

by swasdiva

person Mimiru
schedule February 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hahaha i loved it xDDD and found it cute :3
schedule June 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Update!! even though it's been forever for you LOL But I do hope you do at another chapter where she meets him again in her time or something (:
person liz
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read anything heterosexual for so long- and it was worth it! Thank you for the bumpy ride! That was so good. I like how you made her wet. And how she felt like she'd become a whore after just one ride. I love that. Nice, nice touch. XD
person madmiko
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good golly, Miss Molly! You were absolutely right -- that was a much-needed, awesome little smut fest for Kagome and Youko. You are the queen of dirty, fun lemons! And you know, that really COULD be expanded into a great fic. But it's a great one-shot!! Who knew Kagome had such a mouth on her? LOL!! The words bringing more dirty thoughts to mind was a great, funny touch. And I liked her thoughts at the end, with Youko assuring her she was better than she thought -- better than Inuyasha made her feel. I shall imagine the further consequences of this chance meeting to my complete satisfaction, -- including Inuyasha shitting bricks and then trying to get her back, but saying and doing all the wrong things. And Youko thinking about their tryst and perhaps watching her for a while, and realizing that Yes, he could indeed, fall in love with her. And more hot, steamy, fabulous lemons taking place. I'm so glad I read this! You should write more -- more of this story, OR more juicy little one-shots!! Miroku/Kagome/Naraku? LOL!! HIEI/KAGOME!! More!
person ani
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pleeeeaaaaaaaasssssssseee!!! write more. that was among the hottest things i have ever read on this site. and i've read a lot..:) a continuation on this story would be worth reading.
person MIAmax(nsi)
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue this and i agree there aren't that many descript lemons out there.
person sesshyfan101
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!!!!!
You should definitely continue. i cant wait to find out what happens next!!!!!!
person Banzai
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS NEEDS A SECOND AND FIFTIETH CHAPTER!!! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT AND ALL THAT SHIT! OMG SO AWESOME!
person Jax
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg...that was geat! no cold shower will help me now! plz continue! i also hope to see more of your works in the future...
person Kagehoshi
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Told you I'd be back. Now it's my turn to give an excellent review ^_^

From the first review you gave me for 'To Find What Cannot Be Found' I knew you'd be a good writer. And you haven't disappointed me. Your plot is imaginative and original, you have a style of writing that's easy to follow, even for me, and also grabs your attention and keeps it. The Lemon was sexy without being trashy, and I could easily imagine the two participants from your incredible descriptions.

And to answer your earlier question, which I have been meaning to get to. I speak 8 languages fluently (including Japanese & English), my second language is Chinese. I have what you would call an 'ear for languages' so I pick them up somewhat rapidly. Put me in a foreign country and within a month I'll be speaking like a native. I'm studying to be an Archaeologist right now so it comes in use ;)

Back to you: Please continue to write, I'm all for additional chapters of this story. Also if you'd be interested I would like to try a combined effort on a story sometime. I bet between the two of us (three if we count my Language partner) we could come up with an awesome story idea.