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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is a really good story hope that you write more PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woot, another great chapter., man, you had me worried about kouga's 'perfectness' for kagome...though nailed his character. a little spacy but a good hot. poor kaggers. great story,keep it up!!!
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is so awesome... Ingenious story line, very well written and with perfect grammar and spelling! So now that she's gone out on a date with Koga, I'm guessing that maybe Miroku is next? Well this should be an enjoyable story to continue reading so please do update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG…one of the genres for this is comedy right? I have never read anything genuinely funny from beginning to end and for both chapters none the less! I can’t think of much to say (which is not common). You’ve both done a prefect job on the characters. (I can’t get enough of the way Kagome and InuYasha act towards each other! But then again I like smartasses…) I look forward to seeing how you develop them further. The storyline sounds fine and you have proved it by the two lovely chapters you produced. Speaking of the chapters I noticed someone took care in your mechanics. I can’t remember seeing any mistakes. Give that person a thank you and a treat! I can’t wait until your update. Stupendous work! Now I feel I must recommend your story in my next release.
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I was waiting to see what the cincher was with Kouga... he did seem perfect.
Inu-Yasha was a pretty good sport there, at lest he watches out for her. Soutas martial arts instructor huh? Cool.
Looking forward to reading more...
Inu-Yasha was a pretty good sport there, at lest he watches out for her. Soutas martial arts instructor huh? Cool.
Looking forward to reading more...
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story so far, its sooo funny. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story i can't waite to read more of it please UPDATE SOON!!
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story. I thought for a second that this was going to be an Kouga/Kagome fanfic, but I guess not. This is a very interesting story! Keep up the good work and please update soon..!
xoxInuyasha's woman
xoxInuyasha's woman
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update I really liked this chapter it was interesting and at the same time it was kind of funny specially Inuyasha. So please update as soon as you can. PLEASE!!!!!
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As much as I love the first chapter of your story... you do realize you updated the same chapter twice?... And I was so looking forward to the second chapter!!! :::pout:::: fix quickly please?