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for The Hunt for the Perfect Man

by HauntedReality

person Belle
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! You updated and I was so hopeful and it turned out wonderful! Who's next? I just can't wait to see, you better hurry up with that update, you're killing me with anticipation.
person ME
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was a good chapter it was so funny and Inuyasha was actually being nice wow lol i cant waite to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON!!
person Twilight
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is getting really good please write more !!!!!!
person Zelix
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehe, good one, another good date... heheheh... update soon, okay? this is so good!
person beccapatty
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wowwww this is a really good story soo far! The relationship between Kagome and Inuyasha is really cute.. haha u can already tell that hes a bit jealous! they are just too darn cute!.. hmm whos Kagome gonna go out with Next? how bout... Sesshomaru? or sumthin.. Inuyasha and her definetly have to get together tho.. hmm i have an idea.. how about one of her dates be like Bankotsu or NARAKU.. and they either Rape or Try to rape Kagome.. and Inuyasha either finds out after she calles him and he comes go get her.. or hes passing by and spots them. KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK! and plzzzz update soon!
person beccapatty
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooo i forgot sumone u should have her go out with Miroku, then Sesshomaru, then NARAKU.. like Miroku is too much of a lech for her but she still becomes his friend and he ends up hooking up with an old friend of Kagome's (sango).. and Sesshomaru is just too Proper./cold idk of a person but they realize they are a good combination to be great friends .. and he also ends up with one of Kagomes old friends... (RIN).. Keep up the great work! ooo and Naraku can eventually end up with Kikyo.. the dirty whore.. (oops did i say that.. i believe i did ;) LOL)
person TricksterGoddess
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is too damn great! I like how you're setting the two up and having Kagome being completely obliviouse to Inu Yasha hitting on her... well koga and hojo are down... so who's next? I'm dying to know... So please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!
person DaisyLee1239
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is hilarious! Totally awesome! Update soon please?!
person cukid9
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha! The beginning of this was so funny! I mean, the whole chapter was vastly amusing, but I loved the beginning expecially because I do the EXACT same thing when I'm appyling eyeliner (yep, breath holding and all). I also really loved the banter between Hojo and Inuyasha. I'm glad you didn't portray Hojo as an idiot like a lot of people do -sometimes I feel kind of bad for him, you know?

Anyways, so glad you updated and can't wait for more!
person inu-hanyou
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Update soon!