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Please make another chapter!!!!

Please Update!!!!

Hello, I like this story I think you wrote it very well, mostly Sesshoumaru, I think he's a dificult person to write about and you did great, I read it three times and never reviewed before, I always wonder what he's life was like when he was a child to turn out the way he did. I believe that everyone is born innocent, the way we are raised and the world around us is what difines us. I read on many places that you had another version of this story and I would love to read it so if you still come to this website and recive these reviews please sent it to me or tell me where it's posted. English is not my birth language so pardon my mistakes my email is: nitinha_56@live.com.pt or: anita.m.vieira@gmail.com

Thanks and please send it. :D

very very hot!

it is great.i loved reading it. pls coninue!

I really enjoyed this and only wished that there was continuation. It was very easy to visualise, with wonderfully emotive vocabularly and the internal voice of both characters was done well. It is definitely one of the better Naraku x Sesshomaru stories and am very glad that I found this :D

Thank you for sharing.

Wow that was great! I loved how you cut out the mushy crap and got right down to the smut. And good smut, too! Exactly how I'd imagine it would happen between those two. (Romance? Between Naraku and *anyone?* Not gonna happen.) Hot, hot, hot. Thanks for the read. Loved the violence, hehehe.

OMG!! Bad Naraku! But why did he even bother to let him go?

This is my first time reading any kind of male on male pairings with charcters from Inuyasha. I must say I enjoyed it very much. I really like the part where Sess passes out gracefully. That is so him. I knew all along Naraku was kinda fem..Thanks for a great read!
Im on the regular fan fic..thinking of doing a little something with Naraku and Sess..Im not a fan of the wind bitch..so maybe this will be a better pairing..LOL.

Lizz

Let's see.

I'm trying to find a way to say this well and not stupidly. Um...I thought it was well written, I just think what appeals to me and what you were going for were just far enough from each other that I didn't mind reading it, but it didn't do it for me. I think I like a little less violence and a little more (however unrealistic) like it in spite of himself from Sessh. However, if what appealed to me was the same, I think I would have really liked it...if that makes sense? I actually think you did a pretty good job of how I could see Sesshoumaru reacting to this kind of situation...heh, I'm just in the mood for him to be a total slut, I guess, LOL.

The whole 'effects of naraku stuff in the body' was an interesting idea. I think the middle flowed the smoothest, the beginning the next best, but the ending seemed a little abrupt. Wait, more like right before the ending, the point right after Sessh passes out to him being dropped off. I dont know, it just felt a little quick for me, but I can't really see how it couldn't have been without a LOT more scene, and that might have ruined the whole mood you built up anyway, so... I guess I'm whining. Oh, the one thing that detracted, and really this is in a small way, was the number of 'ne' endings to the dialogue started to feel a little too repeated.

and...I think that's it!