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0_0....................................WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?!?!?!!?!?!?!!?!!?

Wai!!!! What a sad update! I seriously hope that wasn't the real ending. That would be just depressing ^_^!!!! Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for the update!!!
Lots of Love
Suiri

You scared me! But thank you SO much for updating, even if it was a gag chapter. Thank you, thank you!


(Commencing me ranting at the story's Inuyasha, NOT the author or her wonderful story)
I'm not telling you how to write your story at all, but I hope Inuyasha suffers; I hope he does. Sesshoumaru is a demon lord, a proud demon lord that has protected his lands faithfully for hundreds of years. He is not just some snivelling uke that Inuyasha thinks he can leave whenever he wishes! So how dare he, how freaking dare he waltz of with Kagome and the rest of the gang. How. dare. he.

He has sentenced him to death. Made him his semi-unwilling mate and conceived a child with him. One that Sesshoumaru obviously loves deeply with his secretive heart. One that Inuyasha abandons for apparently weeks at his time, running around the country-side with a fifteen year old naive school girl that he thinks he loves. And for what? Inuyasha, you stupid selfish bastard! You claim to be travelling the country side to recover the shards of the shikon no tama and look for Naraku.

Well, guess what moron! Guess where Naraku's going to go? Sesshoumaru has battled with him in the past, that's one strike against him. Sesshoumaru is carrying Naraku's child, a huge second strike against him. And now Sesshoumaru is defenseless. There is absolutely no doubt that even if Sesshoumaru wasn't carrying Naraku's child that Naraku would pounce, absorb his body just for sport or hold his helplessness over his head and then kill him or worse.

(Once again; I'm not yelling at you; I think your story is awesome!)

So, fucking thank you, Inuyasha. Thank you for sentencing your brother and HIS son to death. You don't deserve Inu-maru, and you sure as hell don't deserve Sesshoumaru. No matter what hate your older brother ever had for you, he never let you be killed. So go ahead with that naive school girl that you love, while Sesshoumaru is bonded to you and could never find anyone else, if he wished to. Swing around your tetusaiga pretecting a defenseless human THAT HAS A SAFE HOME SHE CAN GO TO AT ANY TIME, while your near powerless brother is alone in his castle. Talk dirt about him, in front of him, treat him like dirt while you show a young human girl (who is already loved in the present) all the consideration in the world, foresaking your family honor. The very least you ever could have done was to tell them that he's not a monster. Not allow them to assume that Sesshoumaru had killed to obtain his child.

And as far as I'm concerned, I wish to God you had lost him. If Naraku wasn't so sadistic to Sesshoumaru, didn't rape him, that's who I would wish Sesshoumaru with. Someone that keeps those close to him protected and would never let them be hurt in this fashion. But, well, now Naraku's uber evil and that's it.

And I hope you suffer, too! Just a couple of crappy tears (if you even CARE enough to shed them) and a pathetic "I'm so sorry, Sessho" (His name is SESSHOUMARU!) are not enough. You should grovel at the feet of the Lord of the Western Lands and beg that he forgives you. Because after what you've done, you are a huge disgrace to your family. I'm sure the father you don't care about would be proud that you sentenced your brother to death. I'm sure your mother would too. (Snort.) Yeah, seeing you act so unlike yourself and knowingly torturing the man that looks so much like her husband.

And all those demons and people of the Western Lands that you left unprotected, when you took Sesshoumaru, their only faithful protector away, yeah, you should apologize to them too. AND I HOPE MYOGA GIVES IT TO YOU TOO, BECAUSE YOU'RE SO FREAKING OBLIVIOUS, YOU'D NEVER FIGURE IT OUT!!!

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Umm... I really, really wasn't ranting at you, I swear. ^^; It's just that your story is so good and involved, that's how crazy it made me. Someone had to yell at Inuyasha, even if it is a reviewer. ^^;; Please keep up with the wonderful work! * * * *

I did not like this story. It was wll written and kept me thralled till the end. Keep writing, but I hate this story and Inuyasha is a bastard in it.

that was cruel you know! When I come to see the new updates I almost hitted the ceiling because I jumped so high in my state of bliss.. In a blue moon had got a new update.. and then I start to read.. inu maru dies.. inu yasha never come to Sess.. Sess truly manageg to kill himself and Naraku the evil bastard won.. every sentence I read, I became more horrified.. This just CAN*T end like this.. you know.. you almost gave me a heart attack.. not nice.. not nice at all.. I'm happy that there is more.. but.. N-E-V-E-R Do anything like this again.. urgh (I mean anything like this chapter 14.. if you can write a story as good as this, then go a head and write alreaydy.. :D) ouki douki.. but.. the real chapter 14? Please? Soon? ASAP?

oooo..... When i saw -The End- i nearly jumped off my lazy ass to go kill you..... that was mean.... was something i would do... hehe.... eventhough i was momentarilly upset, i can take a joke, and that was pretty good.... not very original cause that happens to me alot.... hehe... well loved the story and can't wait to read the rest

For a moment, I really thought that it was over and that we'd had a really short ending and I was pissed (because it was too short. That ending was cool though). The fake ending shit thing to make us react was funny when you think about it though. I'd call you one sick bitch but I respect you too much for that (besides, I wouldn't call somebody that I've ever met before like that either).

That being said, I like the ending except for Inu-maru's death. After reading chapter 13, I thought that Inu blaming himself, Sessho dying and loosing hope and Naraku just cutting Sessho's stomach would kick ass...But it can't end with so much angst I guess; I don't mind that.

I swear i have a bond with that story. I'm not in the Inuyasha fandom anymore yet I know when yours update. Freaky.

Call me sick or insensitive jerk but I really enjoyed it! I love jokes that almost gives people heart attack or question their sanity! Hey, can you keep the joke even after the updates? It would be fun for future readers, they would just go like "WHAT THE HECK?"! Anyway, I read chapter 13 and loved it! Please, update soon!

Hey. I enjoyed reading all 14 chapters! Please update when you can...I want to find out what happens! And NOOO Sesshoumaru cannot be dead! -tears- .... -nods- Keep up the good work on the story.

Don't stop now! You've got me on the edge of my seat! This story is awesome by the way, I don't like to read a lot of fanfics where the characters are out of place, like Sesso being pregnant, but when it's written well, like yours, I make an exception. Keep on writing!