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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was worth the wait!
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've enjoyed this vesion as well! I'm hoping it won't take long for you to update!
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, another good one! I LOVE your Sesshoumaru. He's as cold as ever but with a softer, more reflective side that really makes the character more appealing. It's not that he's OOC. You've just managed to dig deeper into his psyche.
Another part of your story that I adore is the sex scenes. Even when they're consensual, these parts are always so dark, disturbing, and....sexy. I've never seen Inuyasha the Sadist portrayed so well. However, even when he's hurting Sesshoumaru (who makes a surprisingly apealing masochist) you can sense the love he has for him. And then you manage to throw in another twist. While he does care for Sesshoumaru, Inuyasha also appears to be slightly ashamed of him, which causes the youkai to become emotionaly hurt as well. So in all actuality it's really a love/hate relationship, though if its more love than hate remains to be seen. I just can't wait till Naraku joins this little party! Then things will get really interesting.
Once again, GREAT FIC! You're a talented writer and I'm looking forward to your next update.
-TOT
Another part of your story that I adore is the sex scenes. Even when they're consensual, these parts are always so dark, disturbing, and....sexy. I've never seen Inuyasha the Sadist portrayed so well. However, even when he's hurting Sesshoumaru (who makes a surprisingly apealing masochist) you can sense the love he has for him. And then you manage to throw in another twist. While he does care for Sesshoumaru, Inuyasha also appears to be slightly ashamed of him, which causes the youkai to become emotionaly hurt as well. So in all actuality it's really a love/hate relationship, though if its more love than hate remains to be seen. I just can't wait till Naraku joins this little party! Then things will get really interesting.
Once again, GREAT FIC! You're a talented writer and I'm looking forward to your next update.
-TOT
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh how I missed you *cries tears of joy*. Oh happy day. Great chapter, I don't know which version I like the best though, they're both great.
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great...at the end you kinda feel sorry for ole' Sess
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderfull chapter.... i also think it's smart of you to update both at the same time.... i love the story so far and will be waiting patiently for the next chapter
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Solid. Very good grip on character. I'm liking this a lot, even though it's MPREG. The sex was a bit ooc, but it'll always be when you're employing alternative pairings. Your writing is admirable, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story please update it
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it! please up date soon
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was something I have never spected to read... You have some kind of PERVERT imagination, pal. I would like you to continue this story, it is interesting and more liking to chiks like me... which are tons. I am a spanish-talking person so if I have something wrong, would you tell me? I feel a complete idiot writing things that do not even exist. Well, as I was saying before, you SHOULD/HAVE/MUST continue this fic for I am to tell some of my friends who like this type of things. I look forward to your updates!!
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