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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice update. Naraku must die NOW! Keep up the good work.
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor seshomaru! love this update it
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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please, so much suspince.
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Has anyone ever told you you're an amazing writer(stupid question)? This chapter was absolutely terrifying. Rape scenes are generally so generic, but this one was truly quite imaginative(that tongue thing threw me for a loop). Even your tentacle torture was more creative than most.
Then again, as well written as your rape scene in this chapter was, I still have to say that Sesshoumaru's personality in this fic is what really grabs me. Like so many of your other stories, you manage to take an apathetic, not so well understood character and bring into him a demension of the soul that is not often shown(though it must be there) in their respective anime. The hardest part about fanfiction, especially concerning characters generally thought of as bad or unlikeable, is to show said person in a different light yet at the same time keep them from being overly OOC. Of all the authors out there I must say you do this exceptionally well. Keep up the good work, not that would be too hard for someone as good as you.
-TOT
Then again, as well written as your rape scene in this chapter was, I still have to say that Sesshoumaru's personality in this fic is what really grabs me. Like so many of your other stories, you manage to take an apathetic, not so well understood character and bring into him a demension of the soul that is not often shown(though it must be there) in their respective anime. The hardest part about fanfiction, especially concerning characters generally thought of as bad or unlikeable, is to show said person in a different light yet at the same time keep them from being overly OOC. Of all the authors out there I must say you do this exceptionally well. Keep up the good work, not that would be too hard for someone as good as you.
-TOT
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked it a lot and wish u would hurry up with the next chapter, i hate to wait!!!!!!!!
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well this was a lot different, definitely not nice.
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O. Damn...
*speachless and wants to cry*
*speachless and wants to cry*
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I'm incredibly depressed now.... >> I don't think I can continue reading this, cuz it's triggering my mood swing.
Really good fic, you've written the characters very well. I can't handle this much angst, but this is a great fic.
Really good fic, you've written the characters very well. I can't handle this much angst, but this is a great fic.
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I know, it's a huge review but so many things happened. I remember at first, I was really reluctant to read this because Sesshoumaru was in love with his father and couldn't see that what Inu papa did was wrong even if inupapa might have love him (which he didn't). Even now, he can't see it (and he thinks that he was more gentle! Why because he "prepared him"? Poor fool.) He was so distresse but he loved his father and learned to enjoy the pain. That's enough to fuck someone up. Oh I had tears in my eyes, and I'm in public. Poor poor sess...so sad.
And then there is Inu. Damn him, it's not his fault! Was he pissed because he thought that Sess was just trying to replace him? Or is it the whole sleeping with dad thing? Because he sure isn't one to talk. And now, naraku will rape him (unless Inu stops it which I don't think will happen). And then he will feel guily, even if it, yay! (no, rape is not nice but since it is Sesshoumaru, it's okay. Seriously, I haven't seen a character that had so much abuse/rape in his life especially since there is no proof of it). There should be some tears and recomfort in the near future. My only complain and it's tiny, is that I don't like to see Sess so weak. I love him submissive but if he'll be weak and dependent like that forever, then it must suck. he must hate it.
You must be God or something. And you updated twice that week (I read it later but whatever). AWESOME chapter. Definitively one of the best Inuyasha story i've read so far.
And then there is Inu. Damn him, it's not his fault! Was he pissed because he thought that Sess was just trying to replace him? Or is it the whole sleeping with dad thing? Because he sure isn't one to talk. And now, naraku will rape him (unless Inu stops it which I don't think will happen). And then he will feel guily, even if it, yay! (no, rape is not nice but since it is Sesshoumaru, it's okay. Seriously, I haven't seen a character that had so much abuse/rape in his life especially since there is no proof of it). There should be some tears and recomfort in the near future. My only complain and it's tiny, is that I don't like to see Sess so weak. I love him submissive but if he'll be weak and dependent like that forever, then it must suck. he must hate it.
You must be God or something. And you updated twice that week (I read it later but whatever). AWESOME chapter. Definitively one of the best Inuyasha story i've read so far.
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I thought in this version Inuyasha wouldn't send him away due to the baby but I assume it's a heat of the moment thing.