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September 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Woo I finished the whole thing in a day (it's good to have days off work lol) Gotta say this story was a rollercoaster of emotions. I know you said this was an old story but I think it is still pretty damn good. I know my writting was nowhere this good when I was 16.
Besides the OOCness and extremely submissive behaviour I still love your Sesshoumaru. He managed to remain strong even through all the pain and suffering he went through. Inuyasha on the other hand I simply wanted to give him a swift kick in the butt, man he is frustrating!!
Naraku was absolutely evil and sadistic, everything I will expect from the man. And the twins are adorable, specially the youngest. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Besides the OOCness and extremely submissive behaviour I still love your Sesshoumaru. He managed to remain strong even through all the pain and suffering he went through. Inuyasha on the other hand I simply wanted to give him a swift kick in the butt, man he is frustrating!!
Naraku was absolutely evil and sadistic, everything I will expect from the man. And the twins are adorable, specially the youngest. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
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April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY! REVAMP REVAMP!!!!! I guess I don't have any suggestions but I am super excited that you're redoing. I loved this story and I'm super excited to see what changes and improvements will be made. :]
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April 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm curious, are you going to rewrite the other one, too, or just this one? It sounds like it'll just be for this one. I'm just curious and I like to get to the bottom of things. >xD
Anywhos, glad to see you wish to improve the story. If you need any help or ideas or anything, feel free to talk to me. You have my e-mail and it's displayed for you and in my Author section. Good luck to you and of course I'll be there to read and review as always.
Anywhos, glad to see you wish to improve the story. If you need any help or ideas or anything, feel free to talk to me. You have my e-mail and it's displayed for you and in my Author section. Good luck to you and of course I'll be there to read and review as always.
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July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story!! I like it very much, especially the end, it was really cute and it made up for all the angst in the other chapters. I enjoy your plot and your writing style. I look forward for the sequel.
Thank you for sharing your story with us.
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Thank you for sharing your story with us.
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April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really cute at the end. I enjoyed reading this a lot. Now lets see how the story would have turned out if Sesshoumaru hadn't gotten pregnant...
Keep up the good work!
~Angel
Keep up the good work!
~Angel
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg! you soooo got to right sequel to this, please!
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nice story. action, drama, it was all there. i enjoyed it.
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Normally, I do not review often and do not read first person POV stories. I found your idea's and your storyline too intriguing to ignore. Thank you.
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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! this fic was AWESOME. PLEASE make the sequel. ^-^
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January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I loved it, and I hope that you post that sequal to it soon.