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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
definatly a good story and i like how you still mantained some of the characters origionality although you could make inprove their personalities a bit more. ^ ^ i love your writing though
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was great write more
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can u contined the story. its really good
i love it
u rock
i love it
u rock
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yo great story
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yo i think it was good eccept i hate it when people use mate too much try and work on that k?
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great email me when the next chp. is up ok?
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry everyone, my update is going to be late. I just found out my grandmother has cancer so I'm going to visit her. I'll update when I find out more. Thank you for being patient.
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok that was realy good i liked it. bye the way do u know how i can post my stories?? pleas write me back.
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you shouldn't be so humble. if this really is your first story, you should be proud. my first story completely sucked. it was nice to see that second chapter you added on. not many stories go into what would happen after the "magic night".
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you both for your support. Just for a note, the next chapter should be done in four or five days. Also, Sauratos, thank you very much for your kind words, I noticed as well that there are very few stories that have the secret leak out.