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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~sniff sniff ~ wow that was great story .. please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! It took you SO long to update it was TORTURE! ( and I don't mean to be or sound like an annoying reviwered who bascially screams out to UPDATE!!!!!!
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
**whoa sorry i don't know what happened, but i accidentally pressed submit before i finished. anyways, here's the TRUE review, hehe.
Oh man! It took you SO long to update it was TORTURE! (and I don't mean to be or sound like an annoying reviewer who bascially screams out to UPDATE!!!!!!) but i REALLY like your story, and I just wish that you'd update sooner. I mean, it's such a great story, and when I started reading the updated chapter, I kinda had to refer to chapter 16 a bit, because I wasa bit lost with the characters again. Please don't make us wait for SO long like before. This story is amazing right now. Please continue, because it's fascinating!
~blue
Oh man! It took you SO long to update it was TORTURE! (and I don't mean to be or sound like an annoying reviewer who bascially screams out to UPDATE!!!!!!) but i REALLY like your story, and I just wish that you'd update sooner. I mean, it's such a great story, and when I started reading the updated chapter, I kinda had to refer to chapter 16 a bit, because I wasa bit lost with the characters again. Please don't make us wait for SO long like before. This story is amazing right now. Please continue, because it's fascinating!
~blue
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
god help us!!! please gosh update very very soon. u dont kno how long i have waited!!!! Very nice chapter. I felt the pain they were ghoing through!! Please update soon
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update soon
don't take as long to
update as you did the last time
you had me waiting for so long
but i will tell you that you had
this well written and i enjoyed it
my heart is still racing please keep
it up
don't take as long to
update as you did the last time
you had me waiting for so long
but i will tell you that you had
this well written and i enjoyed it
my heart is still racing please keep
it up
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yea Rin is back (jumps for joy) I glad that she isn't dead but why is Sesshoumaru having a hard time believe her when he can tell if she is lying? Rin loves Sesshoumaru and always will, I can't wait to read the next chapter please update soon!!!!
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really very good for a first story. It flows well without the grammatical and spelling errors of many first time writings. I especially like they way you explained Rin's education, instead of just skipping over that part, and how poor Jakken was roped into being a tutor. Furthermore, your characterization of Sesshomaru, thus far, is one of the most authentic I've read. Good job. I only hope that when I get around to writing a fanfic it will read as well.
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August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this best not be the end!!! i loved it! great story! awesome writing!
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omigod... that was amazing. Positively amazing. I teared up and everything! And the whole chest/gut wrenching feeling of "omigod no..." Beautiful. Definately a favorite. There are a few typos I think since the words that were used didn't quite fit the context. But it didn't detract from the story very much at all. I think this is a story where the author's voice comes out so clear and the story well written to where minor mistakes don't matter anymore.
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg... that was AMAZING. rin can't die, tho! why doesn't the tensaiga work??? =(