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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! You left us off with such a cliff hanger. The writing style is strong, you only my two spelling errors, and the story was captivating. Well done. I hope you update soon, like in 2 weeks or so. This is a great story!
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've just read your first three chapters and I can't wait for more. The plot is engaging and your writing is strong. Good start! ^_^
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha!! I loved it. Kane is going to give Sess a run for his money.
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just found your story......I love it so far. As usualy Sesshomaru trying to get rid of Rin because he can face up to his own feeling for her.....I will always LOVE GOOD RIN AND SESSHOMARU LOVE STORY.....update soon....I'm so looking forward to reading more.......