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**throws a baseball glove to Sesshomaru** Catch a clue sweetie

:) Loved the chapter

All of your descriptions of youkai mating habits are great! Poor Rin and Sesshoumaru, misunderstanding each other so. I hope that Sesshoumaru goes with his hunch that humans may not react the same as a youkai to the sparring dance. Well, the sexual tension between those two is just too much--am looking forward to the lemons. Also, like how you portray Bokusenou in this fic.

Yeah? Well mom loves me best! I am the baby. Anyways, great chapter, no mistakes, the dance was very creative, you made great sense of what Sesshoumaru was thinking VS what Rin was thinking- no confusion there. And man! Talk about tension, Sesshoumaru just doesn't seem to know what he wants or who he wants it from or if he really wants what it is he wants, ya know? Ya... what was that about confusion? ;) "Mairzy doats and dozy doats and liddle lamzy divey A kiddley divey too, wouldn't you." If the words sound queer and funny to your ear A little bit jumbled and jivey Sing, "Mares eat oats and does eat oats, and little lambs eat ivy" -luv ya

Fantastic!!!!!!!! I love the fighting dance.......those two and their noncommuncation....ARH!!!!!!!! I very curious about this agreement and this demoness that he was thinking about........and poor Rin to be stick with Kane with she loves Sesshomaru..........keep it coming please....I'll be waiting....

I love this story, it is one of the best I have read in the past few months. Please keep up the good work and update soon.

This Treasure of words has been searched for by me, forever. Finally I have found someone who not only thinks along the same lines as I for a Rin and Sesshomaru fanfic, but they also have the talent to execute it flawlessly. Breathlessly awaiting the next chapter. Thank you for giving me something to look forward to every day in anticipation.

Pretty cool stuff. I like all that emotions boiling just under the surface...yet he still manage to exude calm. how ironic !
Please continue. Also, very believable in the way you structured the rituals...

I forgot to ask you about Sess' "painful" memory when he mentioned he knew of only one demon who survived when his lifemate died....(it was not Sess I hope) and who he could have been in love with since he "misled and lied" to Rin when she asked if he had ever been in love ???

Oh let this be a Sess/Rin and NOT a Sess/OC...(I hate those with a passion and I hate Sess/Kagome just one notch more !!!)

UPDATE SOON! CURIOUSITY IS A BITCH! I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!

Hello my fellow author. ^_^ Thank you for leaving a review on my story! I'm so glad you liked it, and might i say...KICKASS story of your own. Not many people can pull off the 'im actually there' kind of scene, but I must admit you're one of those few. I'm enjoying it alot, keep up the great work, and again thank you for leaving a review on my story Amber and Gold!