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Yes! I can't believe it, you've finally updated! I'm so happy *goes dancing around*
I'll tell the truth, I've not read the new chapter yet, but I wanted to thank you for publicing it. Later I'll add a real comment!
Bye and kisses

Well, well, well. I didn't know you could write quite like that, it was good. It was great. It was enough that I was blushing. I'm giggling for lack of a better thing to do. Great job, great chapter, can't wait to read about what Rin was actually screaming about. Great detail. No mistakes that I found. Um... great job... great good job... great. ::giggles:: *Has a stupid grin on face* I want dreams like that. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Wowy, tee hee hee, I want to know what happens next. Please continue soon...keep up your great work!!!^_^

I've just read this for the first time. The lemon was great but what is wrong with Rin? Update soon so i can find out.

A dream? A DREAM! Noooooo! It was way to sexy and real to be a dream i was so hot reading that chapter it was a shame when i found out it wasn't real. I loved it when Sess wanted her to say his 'given name' there was something so sweet about that. I'm enjoying this story very much n my friend recommended it to me. Keep up the good work.

Chapter eight was well written, i like how you've portrayed Rin too

She's not too weak but she also has a gentle feminine side

Oh Sesshomaru! Open yor eyes! You too Rin! It's obvious that they are perfect for each other

Great Chapter i look forward to seeing how Rin will explain her actions next

Fallenrose

Are you really trying to torture me with unatural means. I've been waiting days and days and days for the next installment. I'm not trying to rush you but this story is so good that I think if I don't know what happens next my brain is going to explode. Keep up the phenomenal work. As you can clearly see I'm chomping at the bit for more.

Well you can stop nagging, I've read chapters 7 and 8. You did a great job! Even I was getting emotional. The descriptions were memorizing. This is a Rin/Sess Fic and I am really having a hard time not picturing Rin and Lord Kazuo together. He is so handsome; startling blue eyes, hair white as snow, ears pierced several times with glittering gems, and a firm, masculine jaw line and cheekbones. I can't wait to hear the story behind the scars. He is trim and muscular with powerful arms and legs, oh I just can't get enough of him. I can't wait to see pictures, they're going to be great. Well Older Sis, until we meet again, great story and don't you dare lose interest or I WILL tell mom!

It can't be "done"!!! You have to finish this story! You write with intelligence and a flair rarely seen on this site: the act of anticipation!!! The suspense is more than half the fun and your take on the Sess/Rin match is truly intoxicating!!!

PLEASE!!!!!! up date soon. I love ur plot of your story and you r leaving me in suspence...Keep up the great work!