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for One Life

by Mmoirai

person Fallenrose
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very insightful look into what may happen in the future.

I enjoyed this chapter very much and the plot now seems to be unfolding

Poor Sesshomaru! I'm sure Rin will take care of him though.

The way he was worried about her was so incredibly sweet too.

Great Chapter i can't wait for the next installment

Fallenrose
person Ayaka-chan
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol took your advice at the bottom i guess if you get more reviews the faster it will to UPDATE DAMMIT! XDDDD yea honestly i had NO clue how to review till you said it at the bottom of this chapter. soo about the story...ummm i <333333333333333333 it!! DAMN STRAIGHT! this is SUCH an awesome story -was about to say movie at first ^^;;;;;;;;;;;- yea thats me xD ok im done keep up the good work and UPDATE!
person taneia
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update quickly is rin being raped?
or is she struggling against kane please
update so i know what is happening to rin
this is really good your story had me hanging
off the edge of my seat.
person C\'Asia
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have come to like your style of writting but you are always leaving it off with a cliff hanger
i would like to know why rin was screaming with terrior...is kane back???? can you please hurry with
other chapters so i know what is happening. so far your story receives a 10 of 10.
person Dimepieceleo
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was very good I am liking the story line and the complicated plots you have written into your story. Keep it up I look forward to the next chap
person lady_green_bat
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant!!! You return with a vengence!!!
person doll17
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really can't wait 4 u 2 update this story it is so great!!!!!
person Angelfrommhs
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write More I am loving this story!!!
person april
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love this story!!! When are you going to update it??? Please!!! LoL
person aoi37
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that was wrong to lead me to the cliff like that and push me off into the chasm of suspense. I have to say that I am enjoying this fic and it is certainly twisted enough:)