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by Mmoirai

person C\'Asia
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHY ARE YOU TORTURING ME WITH ALL THESE CLIFF HANGERS
THANX ALOT FOR UPDATING BUT PLEASE KEEP IT COMING
PLEASE PLEASE YOU'RE KILLING ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Jazmine
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I WAS GETTING EXTREMLY EXCITED! UPDATE ASAP OR I WILL HAVE YOUR HEAD! JUST KIDDING.
person New Fan
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What kind of creatures are they that have these powers? Why do they attack
Sesshoumaru's domain? When will they confess there love to each other? Great
chapter. Update soon.
person sadsoul
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm just sitting here shocked, and wondering why I torture myself reading your story. Don't get me wrong your story is goooood...tooo goooooooooooood. First you have my stomach in a knot with all the angst about Rin and Sess but now you have added this new element. I can't take it anymore. I need to know how many chapters your story is going to be so I can avoid a mental break down. Please put me out of my misery soon. :D
person Ame_yukai
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally!!! Halelluya(sp?)!!! I love your story and it's going great so far. Keep Updating Please.
person Ren
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tee hee hee, great chapter, really short, but it's okay, I enjoyed, O.O what happened to Sesshoumaru-sama!?!?! No...T.T not Sesshoumaru...waaaah ToT no!!! I want to know the out-come of Rin and Sesshoumaru's relationship!!! No!!! HUUUUU!!! T.T

Other than that though, ^+^ tee hee hee, recovers to fast for my own good!!! Yea though, can't bawl too long on something, tee hee hee, yea, keep up your great work, your other story, was great, and this one...superb!! Tee hee hee, keep it coming!!! Tee hee hee!!! Yea!!! ^+^ if you continue, I assure you, I'll be here all the way!!!
person sraven
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're great at the cliffhangers. I'm so happy you updated. I'm addicted to this story.
person Dimepieceleo
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I most say that that was nice I am really hooked now Can't wait for the next cahpter
person DAXEMON
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are a one for the craziest cliffhangers. Right now a vein is pulsating in my left temple region on the verge of bursting. Do you understand the kind of power you hold over us. Right we are all being held hostage until the next installment. I pine for that day to come. Phenomenal story please continue, for if you don't, I will hunt you down. Thank you. Until next time.
person Youkai No Rin
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooohhhhh Sesshomaru can not die!!!!and Rin can't either!!! I so badly want to know who or what tried to get in....