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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon! This story is amazing!
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Arigato!!! Wai! Wai! You've updated, FINALLY!! Sheesh, but it's okay, I liked it, but Sesshoumaru is being a meanie, huuuu, T.T poor Rin, I hate the whole outcome so far, but I'm sure you will not disappoint me in the end. Teee hee heee, continue your wonderfully great work ne? I'll stay in tune for the rest that is to come. ^+^
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why do you leave so many cliff hangers
I can not stand it please plaese update
soooooooooo sooooon please please
stop torturing me
I can not stand it please plaese update
soooooooooo sooooon please please
stop torturing me
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
why is sessy so mean and things
why cant he realize that rin love him in
return so please udate so i will know
how they will get together and live happy
and on top of it let see some more waff
and bloody fights and arguements
why cant he realize that rin love him in
return so please udate so i will know
how they will get together and live happy
and on top of it let see some more waff
and bloody fights and arguements
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What can I say...be yet again another great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to read about this thing that tried to kill Rin and it's master.......Why is all this stuff happening to Sesshomaru from long ago??!!!!!.......keep it coming!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your story is sogreat please don't give up it's been awhile since your last update don't let it unfinished! bye and have a good day see you soon i hope!
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. Any idea when the next update will be?
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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEEEEASE you have to update your story, im hanging here! :D and absolutely love it! :D
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a very moving and intense chapter. I'm breathless and eagerly awaiting more.
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
1. Kazuo needs a hug.
2. You have a lot of "starred" where there should have been "stared."
3. You also tend to use too many exclamation points. Some of your statements, such as those in the italicized recount of Rin's revival after the wolf attack, could be joined together with commas, dashes and ands for a bit of variety. Also, some of the sentences that end your chapter could be more effective as single-line paragraphs ended with periods (i.e. Ch. 4). Bit more menacing that way.
4. Can't wait for the rest of the story.
2. You have a lot of "starred" where there should have been "stared."
3. You also tend to use too many exclamation points. Some of your statements, such as those in the italicized recount of Rin's revival after the wolf attack, could be joined together with commas, dashes and ands for a bit of variety. Also, some of the sentences that end your chapter could be more effective as single-line paragraphs ended with periods (i.e. Ch. 4). Bit more menacing that way.
4. Can't wait for the rest of the story.