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for One Life

by Mmoirai

person Snowfall
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, this is good! Misconceptions so true to form when emotions are running high. Oh! And the mystery and suspense. I am loving this to death! Well written too.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
person Melitot
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally you've updated! I was dying to know the rest, here =3 what can I say? Well written as always, not boring at all, teasing to say the least. When are those two going to confess to each other?! Darn...
Keep on going like this.
person Chica
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter written perfectly. Update soon so we can find out what it is you keep hinting about for the next chapter!
person Jazmine
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I WONDER WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT. UPDATE ASAP!
person Anon
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Has someone been reading christine feehan novels? HMMM
person Muem
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet- but, yet, sad. porr sessy
person amhor56
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO NO NO NO! How could Sesshomaru not understand that Rin loves him. It is not fair! I hope thing get better! Update soon! Please
person TheFavoriteBabySister DragonsLore
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! And I *know* the next one is gonna be even better. Quick! Write quick! Anyways, I didn't find any spelling errors, and it was a good setup for your next chapter- don't change anything.
person Fallenrose
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought this chapter was perfectly fine, i don't see why you would want to change it at all.

Sesshomaru's jealousy is growing increasingly, it can only lead to disaster

Many things seem to be coming together now also and the promise you made about the next chapter is intruiging.

I hope you are quick in releasing chapter 12 i can't wait to see what happens next

Fallenrose
person lady_green_bat
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm just so happy that you didn't abandon this fic! Loved the latest chapter---you had no reason to worry about mistakes, it was very well written. Keep up the good work :)