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for One Life

by Mmoirai

person lady_green_bat
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AARRRGGGHHHH!!!!!
This was so worth the wait!!! The anticipation is killing me! Thank you for this wonderful story.
person soma
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been checking the site religiously ever since your last update (chapter 11) and have finally be rewarded with a new chapter. I love your ability to take ordinary and often overused scenes and turn them into something believable and heart wrenching. Thank you for continuing this lovely story.
person Jazmine
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SHIT! IT WAS GETTING REAL GOOD! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT! UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!
person animegirl007
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I didn't expect Kane!!!!! He finally realize Rin isn't marked, but he is still going on with the marriage???!!! Just using poor Rin for one night......ARGH!!!!!!!! SESSHOMARU!!!!!!! HE BETTER GET WITH THE PROGRAM AND MARK RIN FOR HIS OWN!!!!!! Keep it coming......
person Ren
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy, oh BOY!!! I'm SO interested, PLEASE, please...add another chapter soon, I love this story, hee hee hee. Keep up the wonderful work also ne? I'l be glad to review for you once more!! ^_^
person icygirl
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NICE CHAPTER AS ALWAYS BUT PLEASE TELL ME THAT IN THE END SESSHOUMARU WILL BE WITH RIN EVEN IF THERE IS THE MARK BETWEEN HER AND KAZUO§ OTHERWISE IT WOULD BE VERY DAMAGE§ SO PLEASE TELL ME AND CONTINUE YOUR WONDERFUL WRITING§ BYE AND SEE YOU SOON§
person Devon M
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was priceless:)
person C\'Asia
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
They were so close to knocking boots
why did kane have to ruin a senual moment
i was really on the edge of my seat waiting for
you to finish you're killing me with all these cliff hangers
you story is getting better and better KEEP IT COMING
update really soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person tergad
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! Great story, I remeber when this story was first started. Keep up the awesome work.
person Muem
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nother' great chappie! i absolutly LOVED it! rite more PLZZZZZZ!!!!! thx