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by Mmoirai

person Lady Kauya
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice and planned out.Really kawaii, confusing(to me that is) sometimes but awsome.
Looking forward for the next chapter alrighty then Ja ne!
person Gemini
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! This is one of the coolest Rin/Fluffy stories I've ever read!^_^ Please update as soon as you can. I can't wait to find out what happens next. This is so cool!!!!! *Hugs*
person Melitot
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Here what I call a damn well worth-waiting chapter! Finally that *moron* (Sesshomaru ^^;) has decided to act after his heart's commands... at least for a while... And what the hell wants Kane?! Another moron... interrupting such a moment >_< grr! Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter. May I ask how much chapters remain? I'm curious to know when I'll probably read the end XD
Compliments and kisses
person Daxemon
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I appreciate your attention to detail in the love scene. I can kind of empathize with Rin because waiting for the next chapter and dealing with these wild cliffies is like waiting for a release that feels like its never gonna come and all I want is more, more, more. Please continue and make sure u take care of yourself. I would really like to see the culmination of this story come to fruition. In other words I would really like this one to get finished, the fanfic that is.....get your mind outta the gutter. Keep up the good work.
person Liv
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
absolutely exciting! XDD
it is so hard to find good sessXrin fics, rin being more mature, not just a innocent kid! here she is innocent, but intellgient, not an idiot!

and your lemons are perfect! I lmost had a heart-attack when she accepted the proposel, but now...she is almost in sess arms! XDD

I am loving it, congrats XDD

kisu no ja ne
person TheFavoriteBabySister DragonsLore
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am inwardly giggling becuz I feel so special I got to beta for this story. You keep leaving everyone off at cliffys and they are dying to know whats next, my hint is... IT"S GONNA BE GREAT AND OO OO OO OO-OO EVERYONE'LL JUST LOVE IT! ACTION PACKED! I can't wait till everyone can share in me joy. Shame! Shame on you Kane, Rin isn't yours, you've no right to interupt, but you'll soon find out the hard way I bet. (Note to the author: "I just don't understand why I can't smell him." *giggles*)
person Rawben
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy damn. that's some bad timing! lol... great chapter!!! i love it!!
person fib
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Augh! Kane! Go away!
This story is fantastic... one of the very best SxR fics I have read. Keep up the great work!
person Anon
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah crap! why did kane havta show just when it was gettin' good? *snicker* i love the sespense and you are a skillful master of it! i can't wait for the next update!
person Morwen Re
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah crap! why did kane havta show just when it was gettin' good? *snicker* i love the sespense and you are a skillful master of it! i can't wait for the next update!