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for One Life

by Mmoirai

person i need money
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
totally freakin' awesome...........this fic kicks @$$...........i am asumeing this is gonna end with sessh and rin together(unless u r 1 of those evil authors)............im just wondering what will happen to the demon sessh was suppose to "marry".....i am still a little confused about the whole marking thing...........anywho update soon
person kruemel
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am addicted to your story.

Your style of writing is fluent and fascinating by every single word.
You draw the characters beuatifully and give a good insight of their emotions and thoughts.
The reader is captivated by your story and lives through your character's fate, truly concerned about them.
Your description of kissing and love scences is so sizzling hot one is well advised to read your story somewhere private without company.

Please update soon, as I am longing to know what will happen next. I'd kick Kane's ass if I was Sess. Kane's getting Kouga-like with his claimings of Rin.
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!! Awesome!! Hurry with the next chapter!
person C\'Asia
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can you please update you have me sitting on pins and neddles
waiting for your next chapter
person DAYDREAMER
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Omigosh! I love this fic!!!! I love this pairing!!!!!!! YAY!!!!! I always wanted to see what would happen if Rin grew up and they fell in love. You portrayed the characters beautifully! I read every chapter in one sitting!! I couldn't stop reading your fic! OMG!! This is definitely one of the best Inuyasha fics i have ever read! GREAT JOB!!!
person midnyte
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!!!! that chapter was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good!!!! i cant wait to read the next one!
person Elin
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my.. I am relly liking this fic! *cough*and making me wanna do naughty things with Sesshoumaru*cough*
person C\'Asia
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
TO be honest with you.....you are
really great at writting and you are
making me mad sitting on pins and needles
waiting for the next chapter. why are you
torturing me with them. you should write
more......tell me how can you take them simplist
thing and make it into a big conflict......kept messing
around you are going to give sessy blue balls 10x over
poor rin none for her neither but please hurry and update
i can't wait til i see it.
person j
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep writing your doing so very well

best story i have seen in a long time
person Menomaru
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEy! you write so incredibly good! you really have to update soon! :D:D love your work!