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for One Life

by Mmoirai

person Nile
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kind of a harsh acceptance for her to be happy with just himi tolerating her. Love it... I am eager to go to the next chapter. :)
person Nile
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully written... the plot was amazing and I just was glued to it from start to finish.
person djserani
schedule May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a fantastic story!! I laughed and cried and it was just WONDERFUL!!! I hope you write lots more!!
person Ruuka
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's finally done :)
I waited so long, and it was definately worth the wait.
I loved the last chapter, I had to skim through the earlier chapters to remember what happened xD
but I loved the ending so much, and you ended the story with a cliffie -__-
darn you XD
person Ah-ya
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah. Four years, but I will say it was totally worth it! It was so happy, then sad, then happy again! I was like... Yay!... Aww... Yay! Great job! I loved it!
person Ruuka
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOOW!, great twist on chapter 19 ! : ).
i LA-LA-LOVED IT! And yes, your dream//reality was very interesting, Cuz your sick like that ! :P lol.
Anywhoo, i hope you update soon. Can't wait for the next chapter >XD

^_^ Ruuka <3
person White_Youkai
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I have no words... The story is really amazing. It's been a while since I've read such a good story. The plot is really good. When I started reading the fiction I couldn't stop. I finished it all in one day... (hell, my mother was very angry at me cuz I had to help her with house chores and instead of doing it, I was sitting and reading the story. Hehe but it was worth!) The end of the last chapter left me laughing. Poor Sesshomaru... Is he really going to ask Jaken approve his marriage with Rin? Because if I remember correctly, Jaken is older than Sesshomaru and he is the Demon Lord's of the West pack member.
Well about Sesshomaru's mate/wife, I think that he somehow managed to undo the mating marks with his father’s fang. Right? Back then the Lord of the North had something in mind and I guess he found a solution how to make his daughter and Sesshomaru happy. Now that I think about it, does Sesshoharu has to kill his mate? But if he does, he is going to die too. He wouldn’t be able to revive her before his death… But on the other hand he has good reflexes… Hehe, well I can’t wait for the next chapter.
I love the way you portrayed the characters of this story. Sesshomaru is so true to himself and the way you presented Totosay (urgh... not sure about the spelling) I could almost hear his voice in my head. Good job!
All in all, the story was amazing. So please, do not torture us, the readers, cuz we are dying to know how the story will end. Please, just do not stop writing this fan-fiction. Update as soon as you can.

P.S. E-mail me when the story is updated. My e-mail is: white_youkai@yahoo.com
Thank you very much. ^_^
person Nahaujaret
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your fic and can't wait for you to update. Keep up the wonderful work and update soon.
person Lisa
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for not abandoning this story. It's one of the best Rin/Sessy stories out. Please don't make us wait 6+ months for another chapter!
person oxcab
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow...yeah where is sessy's wife? but great chapter love it ^_^