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for One Life

by Mmoirai

person Morwen Re
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gaaaahhhh! so cruel! just when i had just about given up hope on this fic and then you leave it at a cliffie! i would normally damn you to the darkess reaches of hell, but i want you to finish with this fic before i do so. if you update quickly i might even forget to sick my imps on you too. good job on this chapter and i loved the lemon.
person C\'Asia
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no it cant end like this make it all
better and have sess and rin back together
and kill the bastarding trolls
but i love your stories none the less
udate soon
person Anon
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy shit tha'ts sad. i hope you have another chapter...
person animegirl007
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!! THAT WAS SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!THE ACTION IN THIS CHAPTER WAS WELL WRITTEN...........I'M DIEING!!!!!! NO....NO....NO....RIN AND SESSHOMARU MUST BE TOGETHER ALWAYS.!!!!!! I need the next chapter soon PLEASE I'M BEGGING YOU!!!!!!!!! Damn, the sex scene was HOT!!!!!!!! keep it coming please.....keep it coming......
person Ren
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...it was about time you updated, tee hee hee...^_^ I Loved the chapter, hope you update again soon, if that's possible that is..^+^
person fib
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
!! An update!!
And WHAT an update it was! Excellent!
person amhor56
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! How intense! I thought it was gonna good, but I didn't think it was gonna THAT good. A lot of angst. So sad. I cryed lightly. The last sentence was the one that left me sobbing though. Great poem. Well I hope you update soon!
person sauncha
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story but....ARGHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! That can't be the end! Please update soon. :)
person Fallenrose
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What an amazing chapter
Rin and Sesshomaru's passionate encouter was breathtaking and incredibly hot
Oh no Sesshomaru! He can't die!
Please update soon i don't want to wait too long to find out if our Sesshomaru will survive (which he had better)

Fallenrose
person Devon M
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I am supposed to be doing homework, but I saw that you updated and took a break ^_^ Loved the chapter. It's getting good now. There is a lot of esplaining to be done. Oh Lucy, you so crazy!

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