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This chapter was awesome. I can't wait for the next one. Please update soon, I have to know the ending!

This thirteenth chapter was one of the most passionate, sad and stressing chapters you ever wrote. Passionate because - thank God - finally Sesshomaru finds the guts to ask and Rin the guts to answer... the question we all know; plus, there's their only (better not be only, I assure you! >=| ) night together. Sad was the desperate fight Sesshomaru put up. At least for me. It was like we all knew he wasn't gonna win... ;_;
And now, what will be of Rin? But, most of all, of Sesshomaru? I dearly hope neither of them dies. I think angst is a must in a love story, but when you're stuck in the middle of a cliffhanger it doesn't seem that thrilling anymore... XD
What to add? Please, update sooner!
Kisses
(Ps: sorry if I made mistakes... english isn't my mothertongue =_=)

it better not be the end!!! have i told you yet how utterly fantastic this story is?

Update! This was such a heartstopping chapter so plz update!

How Could you let it end that way? Its was good but very sad I was hoping they would at least get to die together. But the fact that we dont know what will happen to rin sucks. This must be continued I will die if you dont. Sesshomaru could float down stream and InuYasha finds him and helps him get better and they both go and find Rin and save her. Who will rule the land if he is dead? I need to know. Please...........!


Yours Truly,
Sesshomaru

OMG I love your story You must update soon. You are extremly talanted writer keep up the good work hope to read more soon.



Yours Truly,
Sesshomaru

omg it is soooooooooooooooooooooo freakin good please update soon......i can't wait to see more......

That story rocked! You are one of best writers on this site. I love your story! If only you did own InuYasha... then that show would be even better then it already is. Stay Cool!

"I do not think that this is a bad story. It is on of the best I have read so far. I think that it is a pretty good one to be your first. But, I am glad that it is not your ending because it is too sad!!! I hope you come up with a happy ending that ends up with alot of Sessomaru pups!!! *hint* I will come back and look for an update "


Rikku:)

Wonderful and full of creativity i loved it and i belive u should start writing a book or somthin u have skill man that was a great chapter