rate_review Reviews

Awesome chapter. I can not believe you end it there. Please update really soon.

Okay. It's been such a wait (*crying here*...) but I guess it was worth it. Just please don't make your readers wait that long again.

On to the review. OMGosh !!

Did you know I was misty-eyed and mesmerized by this chapter. It was extremely well-written and the explanations all tied together nicely and believably.

I love the mule-headedness of Sess and Rin maintained her bravery and faithfulness to her heart through the bitter end.

What a cliffy !!! But with just one word *PULSE* so eloquently and strategically placed and your magical prowess as a writer just opened up a whole realm of possiblities ... would she stay dead (let's hope not LOL...) ...would she be revived ??? ...and what about her disfigurement ??? would he still love her despite that (I don't believe he is shallow) ?!??!?!? so many questions....

Now the trick is to explain away how to untangle him from his demon bride.... :-p

Hey, but you know what ??! I have total confidence that the story will continue to be well-written, well thought out, water-tight, and of fantastic reading quality !!!



Lovely, lovely work !!!

Wow! Your story is so amazing and intense! Are you sure this is your first fanfic, becase if it is, I can't wait until I could read your next story! This fanfic is ultimately one the BEST action-pack, anticipating, and alluring story I have read yet! Your plot structure is outstand from the beginning to right now. You evoked so much emotions in one's spirit, and I litterly was on verge of tears serveral times during the process of reading this story. The way that you described your characters and their thinking process is hand down logical and thrilling. You made me think and q? the plot while reading the text, and you made me feel the energy which was transfer from the fanfic toward its readers. Like I said above, this story is truly significant and I cannot wait until your next update. Don't ever stop writting because from what I have read, you either have extremely talented writting skills or you have a hella awesome editors. I will be looking foward to your future update. Have a nice day and keep writting!
-D-

P.S. Your lemon scenes are extrodinarily done! Will there be more during the story?

PLEASE UPDATE SOON I REALLY WHAT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPESNS NEXT

You are great!!!! please, keep writing. I can´t wait for the new chapter

please update soon cause seriously...kane has to die so rin won't be 'in love' with him anymore

OMG!!! UPDATE NOW!!!!! i haven't been to this site for a while and it was rather difficult navigating through the new layout and stuff....but you HAVE to update NOWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hello. I have been trying to keep track of your fic and I hope I have been reviewing, but it's been awhile. Sorry. You must love causing pain and misery. You left us on a cliffie. I hope you update soon. I really want to know if Sesshomaru and Rin get it together. Or did she die? I hope to see other works by you. I think I'll go looking. Thanks for writing this.

LaLa.

o.0 - okay, i'll still follow your story, even after you killed off rin. i was worried for a moment. please update sooner! pretty please...

YAY for updating, boo for leaving a cliffy! LOL, it was great, really good and I can't wait for more. GOod job