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by Rykokitty

person Kichi
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh i hope Inu Yasha escapes!
person Anon
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh! who's here? :O update soon!
person Person
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really really really cool. I hope you update soon, I like this a lot. *evil grin* Naraku makes for such good angst, doesn't he?
person Herald Soucree
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, chapter two gave me chills. The submission of it all. I was listening to Marilyn Manson's "Tied Up, Dried Up, And Dead To The World" while reading, and it's oddly fitting.


"You take but cannot be given
You ride but cannot be ridden
Pinch this tiny heart of mine
Wrap it up in soiled twine
You never read what you've written
I'll be your lover, I'll be forever
I'll be tomorrow, I am anything when I'm high"


Kinda sad. I just finished reading his autobiography, and apparently he broke down crying in the studio while recording the song. It seemed fitting for the whole Naraku slave abuse thing, but also Naraku's misguided desire for love. Update soon! :)
person Dante
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm, I wonder who "he" is. Nice update, glad that Inuyasha hasn't given up hope of escaping.

D_
person Cherry Sakura
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so interesting, ^^ I would love to know what happens next ^_^ I want more more more!
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story so far its getting very interesting
person Lydia NightShade
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeeeeee!!

So odd to see Inuyasha submissive, but you make it believable with his belief he'll escape. I could so see him teasing Kagu... aw crap I can't even spell it I'm so tired... the red eyed lady lol!

Anywho, I love dark slash so thank you for satisfying my sickness and I look forward to future chapters. Poor Kagome, she's such a cutie-pie. ^_^
person Unknown
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is really funny, and amazing, you are really good, please up-date soon. This is the best!!
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far!!! Please update soon!!!