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for Dragon's Prey

by CiraArana

person kagomereborn
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it alot....Pleae email me when you update....I'm moving and I might loose the link in my fabs page...so please email me!
person chanda
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are so welcome. I guess I have to wait til next week... "sigh."
Keep up the good writing.

Chanda
person ME
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a good idea for a story UPDATE SOON!!
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, pointless, funny smut vehicle, and you dedicated it to me! You rock. The only thing is that I can't help but notice that this story is only one chapter long, and that makes me cry big emo tears. Hope to see that update you promised soon. ^_^

PS - I'm going to hold you to that "love you forever" thing.
person chanda
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your story, I cant wait til the next chapter.
person Ayame
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow...I hope you have time to update quickly through these chapters. It's a wonderful storyline actually, I enjoyed this chapter very much. Good job! *gives cookie*
person Kin-chan Pandun
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Snortles* Oh my God. I could have sworn that you of all people would go straight to the lemons, but gawd, did you surprise me. This is hilarious! I can't wait for the next chapter. I totally agree with you about the virginity thing. I have had times where I think on myths and other stories and go: "Well why the hell didn't they just (insert insanely obvious and much better way of solving the the problem here)? What are they, fucking stupid?" I myself am wondering how long it will take everyone to figure out that the dragons only eat virgins. After that, I look forward to seeing who proposes Operation Loose Our Virginity. I hope it's Kagome for both. Her being from around 1997 or so, she would know a lot more about sex and stuff than your average virgin, and furthermore, might not be as squeamish. Although I hate to admit, this is not necessarily the case. She seems to be estraordinarily naive, and, in addition to that, her actions (at least in canon manga) suggest she is uncomfortable with her own body. On top of all this, our dear Kagome has proven herself to be remarkably and selectively stupid (to varying degrees depending on manga or anime canon). So I hope that it is Kagome with the flashes of briliance and not, as I suspect it might be, Miroku, who would suggest it in a very lewd and, in all likelihood, crass manner. This is mainly because I want to see the group's reactions to Kagome proposing, nay, propositioning, such a thing. They all think her so innocent! It would be entirely too funny if Kagome (beet red all the way) explained what sex was about in the "modern era." Hilarious misunderstanding could very well ensue. Well anyway, whatever happens, I hope to read more of it. (As well as more of your other Inuyasha fic on AFF.Net, it's reallly good!)
person Shadow Walker Girl
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just love your work! I read everything you did on A Single Spark!
I'll definitely be reading this from begining to end!
person zyn1213
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Interesting concept you have here. I like the idea. I'll have to keep an eye on this story.