errorYou must be logged in to review this story.
schedule
July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay I may just be an over emotional woman, but this story is amazing I love it, I actually cried when Kagome got frustrated with everything, not to mention shocked when Sesshomaro offered his help. Kami, well done! Please continue and update as soon as possible.
schedule
July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely marvelous, as always. You're my favorite Inuyasha writer on AFF. :)
That said, bring on Sesshy! Bring on the lemons! Bwahaha...
That said, bring on Sesshy! Bring on the lemons! Bwahaha...
schedule
July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know, i've seen this story in the making a few times and yet never really took the time to read it. i'm sorry i didn't. it's rather well done as well as thought out. your plot (which you do have) is pretty well constructed. i see the endless humor in the fact that miroku is spreading teh idea of sex aroudn all of the villages...to bad its not the early 50's so we could lable him as the reason for teh baby boom. it's endless humor though, seriously. your charactesr are slightly ooc but it fits the story perfectly. it angers me that the person said that all of your characters are off base. if this were to happen in the show (again, it would be humerous) then this is how i could see it progressing. you didn't throw inu into the same bed with Kagome right away, and his deliberations over the matter are consistant to his character. i like how you weren't afraid to throw kikyo in there for good measure, even though never really stating he loved her as more of making her an obligation (i really don't like her). but it's very well done, don't let anyone else to you otherwise!!!! also, good knock down for kouga and kagome. that would so just not work. LOL.
schedule
July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Can't wait for your next chapter!
schedule
July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, the story has been pretty good so far. But it'd be great to see Koga's take on Kagome and InuYasha. Mainly because I hate his guts.
schedule
July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I cant wait for the next chapter..please update soon
schedule
July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm so excited to have Sesshy in the story! Please don't make him OOC though (like he immediately wants Kagome, I mean I think it would take a little more...and also like if he was in heat or something!) Either way, i'm waiting! so please update VERY SOON!!! PLEASE!
schedule
July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WE WANT NEXT CHAPTER! WE WANT NEXT CHAPTER! WE WANT NEXT CHAPTER! WE WANT NEXT CHAPTER! WE WANT NEXT CHAPTER! Kudos to you on this story. Please have it that Sesshomaru helps out poor Kagome. It would serve Inuyasha right. I know I wish Sesshomaru would have taken mine. *LAUGHS* Please update soon.
schedule
July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is sesshomaru going to try to "help" Kagome???...Hahaha I can imagine Inuyasha's reaction. Great story btw!
schedule
July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yayyyyyyyyyyy !!!!!! fluffy!!!!!