rate_review Reviews

Finally someone who agrees with me like really it's not that hard to get rid of your virginity, and most people give it away with less motivation that woman eating dragon. Anyways rant done the story is great I can't wait for a sequel. Great writing. Flowy and entracing without being overly wordy ☆☆☆

I loved this story, it managed to be humourous without being laughable, and serious without being grim. And, speaking as someone who has also wondered for a long time why those silly girls didn't just *ahem* dispose of the problem, it was great to see someone tackle it! I wouldn't have thought of fitting it in the Inu-Yasha 'verse, but once I saw it I had to read it (partly because I am a definite Sess/Kag 'shipper), and I am so glad I did! I know at least some of the sequel is posted already, and I am headed that way right now. And also, please write the other fics/sequels too, okay? Please? Really looking forward to them. Now I'm gonna go before I tottally start babbling. Oh, and by the way, I don't know if you use a beta or not, but your grammer and spelling were spot-on, great!

Kalira

yes a sequel would be great. but i hope ur other stories are just as good as this one. but please do consider writing a sequal

Yes please the sequal would be nice. I see though that this note has arived late in comeing since the sequal is already out. I like this little work of artful fun and look forward to what else may come.

i love this story!!!!! WOOT!! KUDOS TO YOU!!!! IS THERE A SEQUEL YET??? BUT STILL, I LOVE IT!!! EVERYONE IS SOOO IN CHARACTER, AND HELL...THIS SOUNDS LIKE SOMTHING THAT CAN BE MADE INTO AN ACTUALL EPISODE!!! GO TO RUMIKO ABOUT!!!!! MAN, THIS ROCKS MY SOCKS!!!

I've got to say that you have got to be on of MY FAVORITE AUTHORS!!!!!! You hooked me with Passion (found on another service, and thankfully found completed here....whew!), and kept me going with Divine Concubine. I didn't know about Dragon's Prey until I looked up your Biography. Your writting is superb! I didn't see any spelling errors, only ONE confusion sentence (So there you have been last night, Kagome-sama,’ concluded Miroku), I couldn't decifer in the last chapter. You're paragraph/sentence structure beautiful!! I can't wait for you to add the next chapter to Divine Concubine! And hope to see more stories from you in the future.

wow soooooooo cool yay that was good please update the squeal

I ran across "Divine Concubine," and noticed that it was a sequal, so I came looking for this one to read, and boy am I glad I did. This is a really great story, and I really enjoyed it. The whole concept is unique, and you write very well. And now that I'm hooked on your work, I'm off to read "Divine Conubine" and then everything else you've got up. As soon as I get a chance, anyway. LOL

I love it!!!! Please up-date soon I have to know what happens next!!!!

No!!! What happened?!!!! Please write the sequal soon, it was good!!!