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Oh and I was wondering who you were going to pair up. I hope its Kagome and Inuyasha. I don't really like the mixed up pairings because to me they just don't seem right and they don't really make sense. Well I hope to hear from you soon!!!^_^

I love it so far. Everyone is in character and I love that above all else. DAMN did they ever both need to grow up a bit so hurray! But your chapters are much too short! I need to read more more more, please update soon! Although I think a lot of people are brainwashed into loving inuyasha if you spend and an appropriate amount of time on him I find you’re style of writing/and this story line interesting enough so that I would enjoy it. =) But don’t forget about Kouga and Kagome! They’re the main pair here right? My favorite pairing ever!

I’m looking forward to your next update. =)

I agree on showing the characters mature. But I don't think that it's OOC to have them mature or concerned. I remember times that Inuyasha may have said something but he really didn't make any actions against Kagome going to visit her time. Other times he didn't interfere at all. Once he sent her back, for her to get the treatment since she was sick. He was very concerned and caused at lot of confusion to teh others as he ran around the county-side getting different items, such as a certain type of fish,crab or plant. All to make a drink that he claimed his mom made to help Kagome get better. ...Although he DID ruin the wonderful geasture by slipping up and saying she's not holding them back anymore. He wasn't thinking that way while she was sick, he was worried.

I would admit that much, even when I do not like Inuyasha.

I prefer Kouga ^____^


I understand about moving. I recently moved, the phone comapny messed up and didn't get my phone turned on for a week.

PLEASE POST ANOTHER CHAPTER I AM REALLY BECOMING QUITE FOND OF THIS STORY EVEN THOUGH I PREFER KAGOME/INUYASHA PAIRINGS YOUR WRITINGS MAKES ME BELIEVE THAT KAGOME AND KOUGA MIGHT WORK OUT PLEASE POST IT WOULD MAKE ME AND IM SURE MANY OTHER READERS VERY HAPPY AND EXCITED TO SEE WHAT ELSE YOU HAVE IN STORED FOR UR FAN FIC GROW




SMOOCHES,
BRITTNAE GASSAWAY *~*

I like...so far interested to see where this goes

ohhhhh i like this story! well done! update soon!

it is very intersting so far. like inuyasha's part of coming to see the group as 'pack' or more of a family. miroku is very in character, good job! hope you stick with
it!
littleolmee

I think that so far you have a really interesting story going. I can't wait for the next chapter and I am impressed that you have taken the time to research wolves. I look forward to how you bring Kouga and Kagome together.