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wow this is a very interesting story so far. so whats with the rock. and are u planning on having koga help inuyasha? well please update this again soon

Uh huh, well um what to say it was good but it could use more Koga come on I almost fell asleep more action!oh and please read my story and review.Good luck!

Awww...that was a cute chapter, especially the Shippou part. I'm glad he knew what to do even if it was tremendously awkward and well funny for Miroku! :) Loving it!

Dreams eh? Well, can't wait to see what type of dreams they are. Glad this is a Kouga/Kagome story. Going to read the next chapter! :)

Poor Kagome being terrorized in her sleep. It was nice for Miroku in his own way to comfort her.

*sigh* I love Kouga filled chapters! Can't wait until the next update, especially since I think there will be KagomexKouga interaction in it! Good job on the names of the elders, I think they are great!

Yay Kouga was introduced in this chapter and yay he has a plan to go after Kagome! That makes me so happy! Wow, I can't believe you are doing so much research, that's awesome! It makes the story even better, I can't wait to read more of your story, it really is a great one! :)

Extrodinarily well written. The dialogue is especially punchy, particularily between the tribe elders. (Ginta and Hakkaku's little stunt felt a little weird by contrast, but hell, you more than earned the right to get away with it.) Anticipating future chapters with zeal.

Have I reviewed this fic yet? Well, I am now! This has got to be one of my favorite Kouga/Kagome fics. I adore the fact that you leave no character unmatured, so to speak. Many authors, for the sake of conflict, take a perfectly nice character, or an anti-hero or whatever, and make them unjustifiably despicable. But you manage to create real growth (haha, hence the story's title, duh!) with each character. The only character who hasn't been given adequate room to grow is Kagome, but I know that's specifically because there's a major life-change ahead for her and your setting up the premise to support that change. I think it's a great decision for you, as a writer, to build up the story in order to make the plot plausible. But I still wouldn't mind a little Kouga/Kagome WAFF! ^_^ One more thing, your skill with humorous and meaningful dialogue is astounding. I sometimes think certain stories are dragged down by clunky, out-of-place dialogue. Sometimes if it's bad enough I'll skip over it. Your dialogue is one thing that keeps me reading, though. It's as fresh as it is engaging. So! To sum up all of my drabbles, I pretty much adore your story and can't wait to read more!

This story is great!! I love the way you explain it to me. Its fool detail. I would love to help you with names but I don't know any:( The only ones I would know is Izayoi which is Inuyasha's mom and and Takun. Takun is from the anime FLCL. Well thats all I have. Sorry ~.~