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January 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhhh! I want the continuation plz! I've been waiting for months.
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
right now i ama out of insperation so i won't say something tricksty. Please continue!
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOO!
More! More!
More! More!
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_______^ *glomps* I would give a detailed and encouraging review... but I'm too happy from finding a fic this cool... so this is about the extent of my current vocabluary... SUGOI SUGOI SUGOI SUGOI SUGOI SUGOI!!!
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noramlly, I'm not a big fan of the Inu/Naraku pairing, but you've hooked me.
This story is so beautifully done, I can actually see it happening, like a real episode.
I do hop e you continue this story as I look forward to reading the rest of the story in the future (hopefully, the near)
*bows respectfully*
This story is so beautifully done, I can actually see it happening, like a real episode.
I do hop e you continue this story as I look forward to reading the rest of the story in the future (hopefully, the near)
*bows respectfully*
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(for ch1)
“…Nor was he…” Nor must follow neither.
“…was [overpopulated] with…”
“…Nor was he…” Nor must follow neither.
“…was [overpopulated] with…”
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(for ch2)
“…with [pent-up] energy…”
“…revulsion, [that] would…”
“…you, Sango[,] and Shippo…” Unless you’re British.
“…Were you that [persistent] in seeking me life we could be so happy…” This one needs to be reworked.
“…her [satisfaction] was…”
“…he [had] wanted, worked toward[,] and waited for…”
Also, “::space::word::space::” is incorrect.
This is very funny so I will be looking forward to more.
“…with [pent-up] energy…”
“…revulsion, [that] would…”
“…you, Sango[,] and Shippo…” Unless you’re British.
“…Were you that [persistent] in seeking me life we could be so happy…” This one needs to be reworked.
“…her [satisfaction] was…”
“…he [had] wanted, worked toward[,] and waited for…”
Also, “::space::word::space::” is incorrect.
This is very funny so I will be looking forward to more.
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...i thought this was gonna be a bad story. But once i read it you proved
me wrong. hehe I want to read more of this story and do hope u continue.
If not i will be forced to send my army of cute little killer bunnies. They are
very cute but they bite quite hard.
Continue with your story or else.... ::smirk:: Just kiddin ;)
I can't wait for you to answer those questions....I luv Inuyasha with anyone
and this is acctually the first fanfiction that he is with Naraku. Im NOT dissappoited
Update soon!!!
Bye!
me wrong. hehe I want to read more of this story and do hope u continue.
If not i will be forced to send my army of cute little killer bunnies. They are
very cute but they bite quite hard.
Continue with your story or else.... ::smirk:: Just kiddin ;)
I can't wait for you to answer those questions....I luv Inuyasha with anyone
and this is acctually the first fanfiction that he is with Naraku. Im NOT dissappoited
Update soon!!!
Bye!
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sqeee! This story rocks! Please write more soon!
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!!