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for Shrine Prostitute

by FlameTwirler

schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've changed my mind and decided to nag you about updating...I'm weak, what can I say? But your last update was last October. Anyway, only if you have time, I'll survive, maybe.
person freelke
schedule March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLESSE post aother chapter to this wonderful story. I still check all the time too see what will happen next. I ADORE this story! please update again soon :):):)
person Anon
schedule January 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
@ 25:

I absolutely adore this! I started reading this some time ago, though I can't really remember when-- I just remember that I had been completely caught up with the story and that it was before Kagome met Sango but after she met Jinenji, so I'm sure it's been a while-- and then it just slipped my mind for the longest of times. Even now, I wish I could remember how this story was brought to my attention once more but I'm glad it has been. This is utterly fantastic and so complex, so well-written, that I'm really in awe of your skills. I know this isn't as concise as I'd like it to be, considering I'm cramming twenty-five chapters' worth into one review, but know that I am definitely keeping better tabs on this and i wait with bated breath for the next installment.
person rowdysgirl
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was just wondering if you are going to be updating this anytime soon. It's been so long...
person darklady
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease update >.<
person freelke
schedule September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW. I just had to review a second time! love it so much. great job!
person Lynn
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am at a loss of words. Nothing describes this chapter better than "beautiful", and I never ment it more seriously before. This chappie is a cure for the soul and I thank you for it! :)
Maybe it will make me draw again :)
person Chelsea
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is so amazing! I could not stop reading no matter how hard I tried. I can't believe this was only meant to be a one-shot and I'm so glad you let the story evolve into something so much more complicated and intellectually satisfying. It's like an ode to the demolishing of injustice and to the death of prejudice. I LOVE it! ^.^ (and the super hot sex scenes make it more of a juicy story, if ya know what I mean...) Thank u so much for taking your time on this story and I'm looking forward to an update! =P
person TehAnsley
schedule September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Seeing that you updated made my day. It's really depressing and aggravating for me after awhile when none of the stories I want to read have new chapters out. And then I got to 'Shrine Prostitute' saw you updated and squealed like a fangirl. Fanfiction it literary crack I swear.
This chapter was ultra sweet and soft. The little boy made me happy enough to lead a parade. The banter provided by Miroku added wonderful humor. Although there was no sex, this chapter's intimacy out shines the others in my humble opinion.
Hungry for more and impatiently waiting,
-Ansley
schedule September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I think this one could even go up on ff.net without serious cutting since they don't get their freak on. (Not that there's anything wrong with that!) This chapter balances the sexy with the storyline very nicely and shows Kouga as a not-dick. Pluses for that. Miroku gets his backstory and an exit date from the shrine. All good things. Their first kiss reminds me of a discussion I had with my daughter about giving away all your 'firsts' at a young age. She'd told me about a couple making out in fifth grade on the playground. "What do you do then?" I asked. "Where's the excitement?" Inuyasha always has to do things the hard way, I guess. Hopefully my daughter will not!!!