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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was simply fantastic! I am very interested, IF you happen to continue this excellent fic, to see what might develop between Inuyasha and Kagome (of course!). I am.however, also interested in finding out more about Inuyasha's past, his present life, and how he is treated as a halfling. We already get the general impression that he's treated poorly, but to what extent does the cruelty go? I always love a good angsty and brooding Inu with a dash of loving Kag to counteract his depressing view of himself. But even if this stays a one-shot, it is definitely worth the read. Five Stars! *****
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very weird.
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
totally continue this! it's an interesting piece and there's a lot of really nice AU development that's possible. Plus, the lemon was hot!! keep going!
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was good and i think you should UPDATE with a new chapter
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice STORY!!! Please update more :-)
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looking at your story you have a very good starter going, anything is possible currently with this. You could have romance, action, you name it and it could fit currently, and I'm not just saying that just because I wish to see this continued (although it has a lot to do with it since it was soo good!). If you decide to update then I'm sure it will be incredible.
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is hot, keep going ")
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Nothing like a good Inu/Kag fic.:3 Hope "he gets to enjoy all the things he could not let himself do tonite" =)
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very very good. I loved it. Your very good at writing. I loved the way you described everything. Especially Inuyasha's feelings on kissing. I definitely would love for you to continue and I would most certainly read and review. Update soon.
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is nice. Please continue! ^_^