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for Shrine Prostitute

by FlameTwirler

person sexykagome03
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I DO hope you continue this, it has the potential to become a great story!!! I can't wait to see a possible update, I'm just dying to know what'll happen! Kagome can come back every night and then by the end of the time she's staying there take Inuyasha with her and...Ooo it's sooo romantic! ^_^ Lol. Well, once again, awesome story!

sexykagome03
person shaid
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::grins:: that was pretty good. I'd really like it if you DID continue it and had her take him home with her in the end... But it's up to you. I'd be really happy if you did, though.
person shaid
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh! and I totally agree with what The C&C Bandit said in their review. I think it would be really wonderful to continue the story, but the plot needs to be considered, hevily. I hope you DO write more, but I agree that you'd need to re-work a few things. Perhaps making the one shot the second chapter and the first chapter a sort of explaination of their world. Whatever you feel is best. And it was a great lemon!
person Twilight
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should write more cause this is getting good
person Alexis
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story! I absolutely loved it and I do hope you continue it. I'll be waiting until you do. ^_^
person BlackNightaYoukai
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you should continue the story. It's plot is interesting. If you do decide to continue the story update soon!
person Sauratos
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is a really great story. i would love for you to continue this. you really have a thing going. it would be too much to ask for a chapter per night... but you could add a few more. you know, you never see any anal in lemons...
person Yamima
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was awsome!
person SHADOW.
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
TOTALY LOVED THIS FIC....I MEAN ALOT!!! I TRULY HOPE THERE ARE MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS FIC, AND I HOPE KAGOME STAYS WITH INUYASHA THE FOUR WEEKS...RATHER THAN GO TO ANY ONE ELS..ANYHOO TOTALY LOE YOUR WRITING STYLE, HOPE TO SEE MORE.
person bb
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this one-shot and hope that you are going to continue it, I really do. It really sounds promising.
Whatever you do, is fine. but please let us know!!
bb