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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I loved the fic already, but this... I'm totally hooked! I really hope you can updare soon because this is awesome. Great writing, GREAT plot. And your foreshadowing is wonderful. eeep! I can't wait to read more!
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!
I'm soooo happy you are continuing this story! Your stile is just fantastic and the story is so sweet and amazing! Even without the plot it would be a whole, rounded story of those two admitting they fell in love... I just love all the possibilities in this! You are a gifted talent!
I'm soooo happy you are continuing this story! Your stile is just fantastic and the story is so sweet and amazing! Even without the plot it would be a whole, rounded story of those two admitting they fell in love... I just love all the possibilities in this! You are a gifted talent!
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love this strory soooooooo much.can you tell me when youre gonna update it next or at least give me a time frame?i really do love this story,i reviewed it b4 when it only had 1 chapter and you said you still had a copuple flaws with the plot,well i think you have done an excellent job so far!
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome! Please continue soon!
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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, this is good! Keep going! I love the direction it's taking and can't wait for more. It's well written and as charming a story about a brothal sp? as one can get :). Thanks for your hard work!!
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful!
Written wonderfully with the grace a story should have despite its raunchy plot... I love it and can't wait to see what comes next..
Post soon!
Written wonderfully with the grace a story should have despite its raunchy plot... I love it and can't wait to see what comes next..
Post soon!
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think I remember reading this as a one shot a long time ago... but this has some interesting potential. And giving it a plot! wow... yeah, I'm going to keep my eye on this one. Good luck getting some more writing done. I know life can sometimes get in the way and I hope you have some time to get to it. I'm interested in reading an update ASAP.
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, reading your reviews, apparently I did read and review this... heheh and I still stand by what I said the first time. I'm really glad you did decide to make the lemon the second chapter and I loved the exposition of the prologue... I'm looking forward to more. I'm just surprised I forgot about reviewing it.
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I'm new here but I read your fic and I love it! It's so original. That probably sounds lame but... Anyway, I think you're a great writer and I really hope you keep going with this and update soon! You capture their personalities so well; Inuyasha always trying to act tough and uncaring but alwasy unable to do so, while Kagome is innocent, easily embarrassed and always jumping to the wrong conclusions. I love this story!
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. The sex scenes with Inuyasha and Kagome are HOT, but that isn't the best part (at least in my case). I love how those two interact when they are not more plesantly occupied, lol. Inuyasha has obviously been so hurt by what has happened to him in life, and Kagome is like a soothing balm over a burn for him. I just love the whole thing. Please update soon.