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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello!
It's my first review ever on adultff.net! In short, Il ove your story and cant wait to read next chapter. In the meantime, I wish you a happy new year.
See you
Noon
It's my first review ever on adultff.net! In short, Il ove your story and cant wait to read next chapter. In the meantime, I wish you a happy new year.
See you
Noon
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
luvd it update soon
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous story. I love the lemons, but I love the storyline much better. I got a little tightchested when Kagome walked in on the blooded Inu. I then got pretty indignant. And I really wanted to just slap Kazuna. Inu's heartbroken reaction when Kagome came in on the 15th night was just wrenching. It really brought home even more that he has really been living in a kind of hell.
I wonder where you are going from here. What will nights 16-> be like for Kagome? Can she see the tetsudai without an appointment if there isn't sex involved? Will she encounter any of Inu's other 'clients'? (Will Kikyou be one of them?) Will Kagome be able to change, modify, or influence the law that will allow Inu to have a life outside this shrine? Could she bring him to HER shrine and provide him with the same safety?
I hope that you will add me to your notification list. One of the things I hate about AFF is the inability to get notifications when stories are updated. Thanks for sharing this story with us.
Caitriona at juno dot com
I wonder where you are going from here. What will nights 16-> be like for Kagome? Can she see the tetsudai without an appointment if there isn't sex involved? Will she encounter any of Inu's other 'clients'? (Will Kikyou be one of them?) Will Kagome be able to change, modify, or influence the law that will allow Inu to have a life outside this shrine? Could she bring him to HER shrine and provide him with the same safety?
I hope that you will add me to your notification list. One of the things I hate about AFF is the inability to get notifications when stories are updated. Thanks for sharing this story with us.
Caitriona at juno dot com
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm glad you picked up this story again. we all need breaks huh? =) but so far i think this story is really great so keep up the good work!
i gots one question though, do the prostitutes wear protection?? or how does that work?
i gots one question though, do the prostitutes wear protection?? or how does that work?
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just thought you would like to know, in chapter one you switched the front desk clerk's name from Ryu to Kazuma, the name of the tour guide. The first instance is in the sentence: “Is there anything wrong with smiling Kazuma?” and it continues from there untill the end of the chapter.
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just thought you would like to know, in chapter one you switched the front desk clerk's name from Ryu to Kazuma, the name of the tour guide. The first instance is in the sentence: “Is there anything wrong with smiling Kazuma?” and it continues from there untill the end of the chapter.
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I must say... that I am very turned on by your story! In a matter of literal speaking! Your story has grabbed my greatest interest, and I can't wait until you write more! I was not familiar with the behavior and information behind this type of shrine life, but may I say that you have adapted it to fit your story beautifully! I understand and sypathize with the stress of getting stories written and up on the internet, so take all the time you need between postings! Us readers will just have to be patient! A story this good deserves patient and loyal readers any how! Can't wait for more...
~LeeAnne aka - Kagome_Chan_19
~LeeAnne aka - Kagome_Chan_19
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is absolutely awesome and i REALLY hope that the amount of time between chapters is not what i'm guessing from looking at your start date x.x please up date asap!
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good... _gawd_ you've got one smoke'n hot fic here. It's AU too, which is way harder to pull off IMHO. I dearly hope you continue with this story; it's on my top 10 list of IY fics for _sure_. :-)
Oh yeah - while it is my fondest hope that your Kagome ends up bringing home a sexy hanyou, and it looks like you've already got the next chapters set up in your mind, know that at least one of your readers wouldn't mind if Kagome tried Koga out. He may not be sweetheart material, but she's got 2 weeks to kill and he's quite do-able. ;)
P.S. - I think it's the tiny extra details you're adding, but you've got about the hottest, most steamily engaging and romantic lemon scenes I've read anywhere, ever. Chapters 2 and 6 are my two most favourite chapters on aff right now. :D
Oh yeah - while it is my fondest hope that your Kagome ends up bringing home a sexy hanyou, and it looks like you've already got the next chapters set up in your mind, know that at least one of your readers wouldn't mind if Kagome tried Koga out. He may not be sweetheart material, but she's got 2 weeks to kill and he's quite do-able. ;)
P.S. - I think it's the tiny extra details you're adding, but you've got about the hottest, most steamily engaging and romantic lemon scenes I've read anywhere, ever. Chapters 2 and 6 are my two most favourite chapters on aff right now. :D
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So. What if the person she gets. Isnt nice to her. Like they hurt her. Um like have you ever had really hard sex and they ram into your cervix.. that fucking hurts. and sometimes the guy doesnt know. The first time that happened to me my boyfriend didnt realize that I screamed out of pain.. it was right after this huge fight so it was hard and rough and totally hot but I had to push him off because he didnt realize that I was in physical pain. and so she is hurt and crying and who does she go to? Thats right.. inuyasha